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The Cosmic Castaway

Apr 30, 2009 20:46

Title: The Cosmic Castaway
Author: rahram
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: 1,220
Rating: nc17
Warnings: It's a slave fic, so dub-con at the least, non-con if you want to be crabby.
Disclaimer: I'm inclined to suggest that this isn't happening, never happened, and will never happen. For if it did heads would explode and baby caterpillars would ( Read more... )

one shot, non-chaptered fic

Comments 47

jayneeeee911 May 1 2009, 01:48:15 UTC

“Spread your cheeks,”.......... behold, the greatest chat up line of all time............

rah_ram May 1 2009, 02:14:27 UTC

wow... it sounds more crude when its by itself...

But I think I got Jared to appear as cold as I wanted lol.

dean494x May 1 2009, 02:45:14 UTC

Awesome. Jared appears cold, but the last paragraph just .... changes him. And the idea of not going anywhere without a card (not even to the bathroom, so mean) and having hooks in the wrist cuffs.
Won´t you follow it ? It´s a whispered promise and I think it will be great to read some more. Beautiful work. *hugs :)*

rah_ram May 2 2009, 04:01:28 UTC

hehehe, Jensen's a slave, he's not allowed to do things by himself :0)

I'm not sure if I'm going to make it into a series or not, though I'm seriously thinking about it because I love it so much.

dean494x May 2 2009, 18:21:54 UTC

Hope you decide to do the series, I´m sure it´g going to rock. *hugs*

veleda03 May 1 2009, 03:22:22 UTC

loved it...are you going to write more?????? :-)

rah_ram May 2 2009, 04:01:46 UTC

hehe glad you loved this :0)

I'm not sure if I'm going to make it into a series or not, though I'm seriously thinking about it because I love it so much.

calijirl5150 May 1 2009, 04:04:16 UTC

Oh this so needs to be a series. Its just way to hawt for it not to be. You would be robbing the world & that's a sad thing :( :P

rah_ram May 2 2009, 04:02:05 UTC

hehehe :0)

I'm not sure if I'm going to make it into a series or not, though I'm seriously thinking about it because I love it so much.

maria9631 May 1 2009, 04:38:39 UTC

This was just heavenly. I love cold Jared. Make his hot.
Jensn is just plain o' HOt!

Yes, please make into a series.
wonderful work!

rah_ram May 2 2009, 04:02:55 UTC

lol, I like cold Jared in this aspect, like a lot but if I wrote more, he wouldn't be as cold lol. Though I'm not sure rather I'm going to write more or not.