LJI Friends and Rivals Episode 0.5 - The Giving Of Thanks

[dreamsreflected]

She rummaged frantically through her dresser muttering to no one in particular, "I know I have them in here somewhere," as she shoved aside socks, a passport, and, a few pieces of long forgotten costume jewelry. "Ah ha! There they are," she exclaimed tucking the precious artifacts into her purse before tearing down the staircase and sliding

Comments

[murielle]

Wow! Unexpected ending. Perfectly played! I was so caught up in the beauty, and the ritual, and the writing, and then... blam! LOL! Love it!

[eternal_ot]

Ah! loved it! Good use of the prompt..loved where it went..Great work..well written!! Kudos!

[sinnamongirl]

LOVE the ending, what a great idea!