The Legendary Mousekewitz Clan

Apr 13, 2014 22:49

Cheddar strained to push himself into his 26th push up just as Provolone walked into the room, as his friend waited nervously by the chewed out hole in the wall, leaning gently against a set of old, frayed copper wires ( Read more... )

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dreamsreflected April 14 2014, 13:15:47 UTC
thank you. Old man Wally is a crotchety farmer with a passion for whiskey and day old cigarettes but lacking a passion for mousetraps.

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adam_0oo April 18 2014, 19:25:04 UTC
So, clearly, with all that detail and name, you already know Wally and he is a customer.

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dreamsreflected April 23 2014, 03:42:11 UTC
sadly I'm just making this up as I go.

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kajel April 15 2014, 01:34:25 UTC
This was cute. Cheddar seems to have a preternatural instinct for danger.

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dreamsreflected April 15 2014, 19:39:42 UTC
I'm pretty convinced this was how the mice at the cabin plotted things one year. Sometimes they're very crafty.

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eska818 April 15 2014, 23:19:56 UTC
I love their names! Also, is Mousekewitz a reference to An American Tail? Because I love that movie. XD

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dreamsreflected April 23 2014, 03:43:17 UTC
mousekewitz was not an intentional hat tip to American Tail as it's been years since I"ve seen it but perhaps subconsciously?

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onda_bianca April 16 2014, 00:06:55 UTC
Fun entry:)

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dreamsreflected April 23 2014, 03:43:24 UTC
thanks :)

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jem0000000 April 16 2014, 02:30:51 UTC
I'm glad they got away, but poor Wally!

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dreamsreflected April 23 2014, 03:44:00 UTC
this is actually how I picture mice behaving when people tell me "well I have a mouse problem and I've tried everything".

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