I got hooked on this with just the PROLOGUE. And then THIS. And It's just so heart-wrenching and frightening. Alfred's thoughts and then Canada trying to sound calm only to start panicking and Arthur going against what it seems he would do if it were anybody else. I also have a feeling I'm gonna love the OCs because you give them actual personalities! They're so human, I love it. I'm so tempted to go and read the fill on the kink meme but at the same time, knowing you're revising it, I want to be COMPLETELY surprised as each revised chapter comes out...so I'll wait and stay for what promises to be a crazy ride. <3
Glad you enjoyed~ I'll be sure to mention when I leave the section that I already covered in the kink_meme, so you can read it without fear of spoilers.
I come late again...sephydarkMarch 12 2010, 04:35:49 UTC
Oh wow, this is shaping up to be even better than the kink_meme version. And I thought that was amazing. I'm really excited to see what you change, and how it continues after you stopped there.
please continue... I was enjoying the fill on the Meme when it ended, and was heartbroken... Took me a couple of hours to find this version, and now I need more.:)
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looking forward to your update..
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THIS....THIS IS EVEN MORE AMAZING THAN WHEN I FIRST READ IT ON THE KINK MEME.
...I love you. Seriously. <3
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I got hooked on this with just the PROLOGUE. And then THIS. And It's just so heart-wrenching and frightening. Alfred's thoughts and then Canada trying to sound calm only to start panicking and Arthur going against what it seems he would do if it were anybody else. I also have a feeling I'm gonna love the OCs because you give them actual personalities! They're so human, I love it. I'm so tempted to go and read the fill on the kink meme but at the same time, knowing you're revising it, I want to be COMPLETELY surprised as each revised chapter comes out...so I'll wait and stay for what promises to be a crazy ride. <3
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Also, do you mind if I friend you?
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Took me a couple of hours to find this version, and now I need more.:)
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