Fic: Disobedience Equals Punishment

May 05, 2011 14:25

Title: Disobedience Equals Punishment
Author: dreamscarred
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Randy Orton X Evan Bourne
Warnings: D/s, dub-con, spanking, toys, dominat!Viper, resistant!Evan
Summary: Evan doesn't realize he broke a very simple rule. However Randy is ready to hand him his punishment
Beta: None all mistakes are my own, so please forgive me for ( Read more... )

pairing:bournton, fanfiction:one shot, fanfiction

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dreamscarred May 7 2011, 13:01:22 UTC
Glad you liked it seems like everyone wants that sequel have to see if my bunnies agree.

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dreamscarred May 7 2011, 13:06:10 UTC
They will probably give a sequel in time. My bunnies are quiet odd at the moment.

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rfg_72 May 5 2011, 22:02:26 UTC
Ok, this was great. Especially such a 'little' rule. Evan's not really going to think about having his shirt off after a match and talking to someone. So, he and Randy need to figure out those rules, and I want to see what happens when Randy breaks one of Evan's big rules. Thanks

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dreamscarred May 7 2011, 13:02:06 UTC
Thanks for reading. I might be able to write another fic where Evan`s rules are created.

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fms_fangirl May 5 2011, 22:03:41 UTC
I love how Randy stopped as soon as Evan said he was sorry. After all, who could resist those puppy eyes?

I do hope we're going to find out what Evan's rules are and what kind of punishment he would devise.

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dreamscarred May 7 2011, 13:03:07 UTC
Not even Randy can resist Evan`s sad eyes most of the time. If my bunnies give me a plot for Evan`s rules I will write it.

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kaybriwil May 6 2011, 16:16:46 UTC
love it. absolutetly love it. and i must know about other rules that poor evan may and will break for the amusment of our Darling Viper and us, of course. I want a follow up of Evan's rules for Randy.

Bravo

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dreamscarred May 7 2011, 13:04:40 UTC
Glad you liked it. Have to see if my bunnies decide to give me Evan dishing out the rules.

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stillthere4me May 8 2011, 23:20:27 UTC
Randy stopping as soon as Evan apologized? That was wonderful.

Of course, the punishment himself was pretty hot as well (though it would have been more fun if Evan had enjoyed more as well, but it WAS a punishment).

I would like to see Evan breaking some more rules... and being punished in a way he might enjoy a little more. ;)

LOVE Possessive!Randy. Never get tired of reading him. ;)

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dreamscarred May 9 2011, 13:47:20 UTC
Never know I might write another fic with Evan breaking more rules have to wait and see. Thanks for reading.

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