See Through Me 6/?

[dreamscarred]

Title: See Through Me 6/?
Author: dreamscarred
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Randy Orton X Evan Bourne
Summary: Evan is upset that Randy never wants to be around him when they are working shows in St. Louis and soon finds Randy's only trying to not lose the person he loves most.
Beta: None all mistakes are my own, so please forgive me for any errors.

Comments

[dreamscarred]

Well I'm still worried about it and you know why. Yep Randy is the noisy one in this fic. I know you love snuggling, I love it too. I could give you the next chapter now but I think I'm going to wait.

[dreamscarred]

I always worry its part of my disability. I get yelled at for constantly worrying. Won't be a long wait just need to get caught up on LJ first.

[kaybriwil]

awww...all sweet and cuddly and evan and randy and randy's world is two things...love it

evan has it right, he has the power---funny how that works

[dreamscarred]

Yep Evan is a powerful bottom and he knows it and does not feel weak just because he takes it. Glad you liked this.

[stillthere4me]

Don't think I've ever read wax play before (which is weird considering all the harder stuff I enjoy reading), but that was a very sexy scene. And even though I really prefer Evan on the bottom, Randy grinding on top of Evan like that, and saying "never say never" was very hot. ;)

This I think was my favorite part though:
“Bet your glad I’m not a screamer tonight aren’t you,” Evan snickered as Randy pressed a finger against the rim.

“You are a screamer trust me I just haven’t brought out the equipment to make you do it yet,” Randy threatened playfully as his finger went in up to the first knuckle.

X_X I want to see Randy use the equipment! XD Of course, that would absolutely not be appropriate with Alanna in the house... (and Randy not allowing the blowjob because of that was hilarious... XD).

And the end of this chapter was very sweet. :)

(XD Although I'm picturing Randy very carefully choosing his words to tell Alanna, and Alanna being like "duh dad, I already knew that..."--but in a much cuter little girl way. XD)

[dreamscarred]

It was my first time writing wax play so its a first for both of us. :D

Don't worry I have a little fic written where Randy breaks out some of his toys. :D And its in a place Alanna is not.

Have to wait and see if Alanna knows.

[stillthere4me]

It was a fun read for me, so I hope it was fun to write for you! :)

XD I look forward to seeing that!! ;)

*waits patiently*

[sadwal1538]

Perfect...simply perfect. They are amazing together. I love it.

[jovi_diva]

That was so loverly. *sighs* Wonderful, hot, steamy, passionate love making!

Oh and...

“Good. Just know my world consists of two things,” Randy whispered. “Alanna and you.”

...brought tears!