Fic: Battling Perdition (1/3)

[dreamscapemusic]

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Battling Perdition (1/3)
Author: Dreamscapemusic
Rating: T
Year written/published: 2011
Pairing (If any): None
X-Posted: Fanfiction.net, SPN communities
Disclaimer: I don't own Supernatural or any of the characters therein.
Notes/Warnings: Spoilers up through season 3
Summary: AU from mid-season 3. Sam got Dean out of his

Comments

[jennytork]

Other than the white text (I had to highlight it all to read), this was very good! Can't wait to read the rest!

[dreamscapemusic]

Ah crap! Sorry about that, I need to fix my settings. But thanks!

[mybrokenlocket]

I'm so glad you wrote/posted this. It's such a great idea. I can't wait to see Sam and Dean interact with delusional!Jimmy.

I think your Bobby is very authentic. On a second reading, if I had a suggestion, I'd say you could trim the long paragraph in the middle, the one that starts "That's the one." It seems a lot of detail to just get across "demons killed his family in front on him, now he's off the deep end." But it didn't throw me out of the story the first time. You've watched enough Supernatural that all the characters' vocal patterns and tics are familiar, at this point you can definitely trust your instincts.

Finally, what does it say about me that once I read "Bobby, what the hell's going on?" I half expected the answer to be DINOSAURS IN THE FREEZER- NO SUDDEN MOVEMENTS?

[4422shini]

ooh i'm interested to see where this is going!

[tabaqui]

Oooooh!
I like this - very intriguing! Poor Jimmy. And i love Sam-got-Dean-out-of-the-deal fics, even if the getting-out causes problems.

Looking forward to more!