A Life In Dreams: Chapter 4

[dreams_power]

This took a lot longer for me to write than I was expecting... mostly because it kept changing on me. Chapter 5 will bring about the resolution of this dream, and will bring things into sharper focus if all goes as planned...

Current Word Count: 9,149

Chapter 4

Wes stands under the vast canopy of a red maple, staring at the blood red

Comments

[murder_of_raven]

Hmm... floaty like a dream. I like how absurd you can get without ever losing your dark edge.

A few grammar/flow mistakes, but I'm sure I'm at least as guilty with my last post.

^___^ Great job! I can't wait to see were you're going with the plot...

[dreams_power]

Floaty's a good word for it :P And thank you, I think?

I warned people at the start that I'm not editing until December. :P And yes.

I have about four potential plots on the run. Two will become subplots, one will fade into being a subsubplot, and the other will reign supreme ~

[murder_of_raven]

^___^ yeah i thought so too. and yes that was a compliment *huggles*

XD neither am i. (could you tell? XD)

wow that was... roughly the vaguest thing you could've said. XD i look forwards anyways.

[dreams_power]

:P

Yuppers ^.~

Thank you. I like being vague. && Not that that's obvious or anything.