Brimstone/Neverwhere: Nobody Beats The Devil

[dreams_power]

Title: Nobody Beats the Devil (or Lucifer VS the Marquis De Carabas)
Fandom: Brimstone/Neverwhere
Word Count: 1,450
Pairing: Lucifer/Ezekiel
Summary: Not all of the damned souls stayed in the States

This is so Sheera's fault, and it totally got away from me. But that's okay.

Comments

[dreams_power]

Hello,

Thanks for the compliments. When I'm writing a story, I describe a scene in my mind more than anything else, so that's probably why it seems cinematic.

As for the sentences, I don't really want to make an obvious break because time-wise, there is no break and I think putting one would be more confusing. At least it would be for me. I don't know.

The story itself is a one-shot, but if I think of another crossover between Brimstone and Neverwhere, who knows?

Thanks again!

PS: I'm sorry if this sounds rude, but how did you come across this story? I only posted it on this journal and I don't remember your name from a community, so I'm kind of curious.

[dreams_power]

... *glimmer of memory* Right. I'm sorry. I removed you from my friends list a while ago because you didn't update for a fair amount of time, but the name did ring a bell. The chicken and egg.

I don't mind the intrusion atall, I just had a memory hole. >.<

*refriends*

[trascendenza]

The pain of having a soul's name erased from his skin seemed sharper with its scribe present.
Oooh, lovely.

Is that your manservant?
HAHAHAHA! Oh, manservant. I love it.

“Are you an idiot?” The detective managed to say despite his employer’s chokehold.
*grin* Zeke would so say this.

This was more than enough to convince Ezekiel that the man was completely insane.
And he'd be right! Hehehehe.

It felt like he was dying; but he had never felt so alive. He was kissing back before he realized what he was doing, desperate to feel.
Wow... that was just all kinds of hot. Phew. Even better for its unexpectedness. Just fantastic.

For a moment, he could have sworn he had a heartbeat. For an instant, he forgot who he was.
*wibbles* Oh, Zeke! This is gorgeous. Lovelovelove.

You know how to work the Brimstone, m'dear, you certainly do. And this wins at crossovering! ^^

[dreams_power]

He is SO a manservant!

But I will admit, my snark reserves were running on low by the time I finished this. ^.^' I think it turned out well though.

[trascendenza]

HE IS! I LOVE IT!

Yeah, those two have the snark in abundance. And I concur. You meshed these two very nicely.