Visiting

[dreams_power]

Title: Visiting
Word Count: 410
Notes: Written for a writing meme challenge.
Summary: A hundred years after the story of The Winged Ones., a traveler stumbles across a piece of their culture.

For michael_collins

Comments

[michael_collins]

FUCK YES!!!!!

that was awesome.

I love it so much. and you're doubly awesome for writing it for me.

the only thing that bothered me was "his five year-old self"...it didn't read right...but uhhhhhh i dunno what else to put, "looked down at the five year old" sprung to mind but that's a different viewpoint so i dunno, i guess it's fine.

ROCK OUT STEPH!!!!!!! hehe

[dreams_power]

^.~ Consider it a present.

I was thinking of doing a out-of-time italized thing but then I thought it'd break the narrative a little. If I think of something better, I'll change it.

Cheers!

[michael_collins]

oh yeah and if you want to give me something to write i will give it a shot. <3

[dreams_power]

I'll get back to you on that one, k?

[trascendenza]

“People who were blinded and now lie in shadow.”
Gorgeous.

One cannot intrude on a place of sorrow.
A strangely appropriate sentiment in this particular story.

Love the detail about the scar on his back; it makes his link to the past a lot more palpable.

Yeah, you should write more TWO's 'verse stuff :)

[dreams_power]

Considering I have two unfulfilled request for the meme, there will be more from the TWO 'verse... 100 years into the past, and something with Those With Fur.

Have an idea for one and i'm working on the other. For now though, methinks a nap is in order.

And nice comment spam ^+^