I am highly impressed with all of these. The last one threw me off because of the writing...
I think it should be "Love is not something...", in keeping with the voice and the grammar of the next fragment. "For Kelly" instead of "If you asked Kelly," .... and maybe get rid of some of the run-on nature of the rest of the paragraph.
Pretty much all of the rest of it was written very professionally, I thought.
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I think it should be "Love is not something...", in keeping with the voice and the grammar of the next fragment. "For Kelly" instead of "If you asked Kelly," .... and maybe get rid of some of the run-on nature of the rest of the paragraph.
Pretty much all of the rest of it was written very professionally, I thought.
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Thank you! ^.^ Feel free to read whatever else catches your eye.
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