Dreaming of Power's Destruction: Chapter 3
Warnings for: Unabashed porn, rape, sex as a weapon, and general ouchies.
( In which the siren visits the dragon, and the Demon's plan is put into action )
( In which the siren visits the dragon, and the Demon's plan is put into action )
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Anyways very good (despite the rape and such), it could use a little editing (the last one had a "nad" instead of an "and"... I saw a few other little things like that but I can't remember them now).
It's overwhelmingly dark, but didn't feel so dark while I was reading it... I really like the Magic/Unmagic idea, very cool ^__^ . I could add more but I guess that's it... I look forward to the next Chapter! Also tonight I'll catch up on Residual Hate, so I'll be ready when you get back around to that one (I think I only haven't read 1 or 2 chapters of it).
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