Take Care What You Ask of Me, 'Cause I Can't Say No

Aug 10, 2011 19:02


Title: Take Care What You Ask of Me, 'Cause I Can't Say No.
Author: dreamlitnight
Genre/pairing: Supernatural, hurt/comfort
Characters: Dean W. and Sam W.
Rating: G
Word-count: approx. 2,500
Summary: Sam wants a vacation. Dean wants to give this to him, but it might not be possible.
Spoilers: Maybe slight reference to Season 4 and onward... very slight, ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort, psychological damage, hurt!dean, supernatural, sick dean, winchesters, sam

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4422shini August 11 2011, 01:44:42 UTC
Oooh This was so great! I love how you described the flashbacks and Dean's anxiety. Really paints a picture for the reader. Great fic! Thanks for posting :D

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dreamlitnight August 11 2011, 21:26:19 UTC
I am pleased that you thought the flashbacks were worked. I really wanted it to feel like the reader was right in the middle of the nightmare with Dean. So, happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for the encouragement! Very appreciated!

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borgmama1of5 August 11 2011, 02:27:51 UTC
Oh, harsh...sad...sadly believable.

They need such different things...

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dreamlitnight August 11 2011, 21:24:13 UTC
You got it... the brothers, who are so very alike in their dedication to one another and yet need such different things in order to be content. Thank you so much for taking time to comment. It is such a joy to write and then to have others enjoy it or at least find it interesting. lol

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dante_s_hell August 13 2011, 21:27:48 UTC
What a wonderful story! Dean's anxiety and panic were so palpable! I love their interaction as well.

Thanks for sharing!

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dreamlitnight August 14 2011, 01:31:58 UTC
Thank you for the kind comments! The boys' relationship fascinates me and I love to try my hand at writing it! I'm glad it worked for you!

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marlowe78 October 10 2011, 22:25:12 UTC
Well-done. Poor Dean, and also Sam - because if this is true and both need such different things, it will be hard to have a home together. It would be constant compromise, and once they realize that, it'd be hard on both.

Very good triggers you wrote in for Dean. Bees and burning - interesting.

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