Arabian Nights (Au!Fic) 2/8

Apr 30, 2011 17:14

“I always listen to you, don’t I Min?” Ryeowook grins at him as he sashays out of the bedroom, bangles clinking as he goes.



Jongwoon’s life is turned upside down, dowsed in kerosene and set on fire.

At least, that’s what it feels like; sitting in the palace kitchen of all places with a cute little immigrant talking a mile a minute and ( Read more... )

!arabian nights, fandom: super junior, fanfiction, pairing: henmin, pairing: yewook

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kellsung April 30 2011, 21:15:03 UTC
HOMFG HOMFG SPOOOOOOOOOOOOOT :'DDDDDDD

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kellsung April 30 2011, 22:45:30 UTC
omg bb :'DDDDD why are you so talented is beyond me, i will be forever jealous of your writing skills. i will never stop marvelling at how skillfull you are with words. i love to read you, it's a whole new experience each time. and again, the mood was perfect, the dialogues were perfect (they were actually more than perfect but i don't know any better words to use here, i'm sorry, my lack of language competence is showing) and the smut, omg THE SMUT :'DDDDDD i should forever ship you bb. you give me everything i've ever needed in yewook fics, and how do you do this is, again, beyond me. i will just be forever amazed at my fail in comparison to your ultimate, eternal win.

care to read yourself? i'm sure you're dying to XD

“Speaking of vermin, where is he? Shouldn’t he be by your side at all times?”
oh bb, it nearly sent me choking XDDD poor jongwoon, forever a pest XD *coughcoughi'dgladlysmacksungminonthefaceherecoughcough*

His eyes are gleaming as he sits across from Jongwoon, and a warm cup of jasmine tea is set in front of him by ( ... )

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kellsung April 30 2011, 22:57:21 UTC
aaaaaaAAAAAA, omg i totally forgot to mention i L O V E D the part when jongwoon kissed around ryeowook's eyes and smudged the kohl in the process... you know i love it. :'D

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kellsung April 30 2011, 23:15:05 UTC
oh and i'm reading it for the 3rd time because you're having dinner now and i think i'm stupid or just sleepy becasue i forgot one more thing:
Ryeowook’s bracelets are cool to his skin as they move up and down the Prince’s arms when he rocks upward, face buried in Jongwoon’s neck as he murmurs senseless pleas into it, and leaves a hard bite when it all becomes too much, the world turning on it’s axis before standing still again.
this cat, THIS. this is like poetry, honey to my ears. how do you write smut so beautifully? teach me :(

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seeeno April 30 2011, 21:52:42 UTC
SPPPPPOOOOOTTTT :D:D:D

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seeeno May 4 2011, 04:14:13 UTC
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I NEVER COMMENTED ON THIS WTF. WTFWTFWTF. I FAIL.

I have to work in the morning and I'm too lazy to actually be original so I'm just going to steal part of Tania's comment:
why are you so talented is beyond me, i will be forever jealous of your writing skills. i will never stop marvelling at how skillfull you are with words. i love to read you, it's a whole new experience each time. and again, the mood was perfect, the dialogues were perfect (they were actually more than perfect but i don't know any better words to use here
MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY. God, I love the way they banter, it's so them. Them. That's the only way to describe it.

AND THIS LMFAO
They walk in a relatively comfortable silence up the curving stairs until a hand unceremoniously yanks on the back of his hood, running ahead of him on the stairs like a blur. This has Jongwoon grabbing the tail Ryeowook’s sash as he falls backwards, and sends both of them tumbling back to the bottom of the long marble staircase.This is ( ... )

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dreaminginside May 5 2011, 20:33:23 UTC
No you don't bb, you did and thats what counts!XD

;~; The both of you are just too nice<3333333333333333 And they're banter is the funnest part to write!

Lol I knoooow, that's what I see when I imagine it tooXD

I have no idea bb, if I knew I would tell youXD I'm glad you find it that way :D And no it's not<3

Thank you as always bb<3 and you can't die, there's still part three!XD

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kajor April 30 2011, 22:06:16 UTC
fghhggjjhfkdfh, uh, I mean spot XD

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akikai13 May 1 2011, 00:17:39 UTC

Soo amazing!!! I love it!! I ish sooo proud of you Appa! ;)

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dreaminginside May 1 2011, 01:27:50 UTC
Thank you boo! Ahaha I'm glad :D

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timmii_luvs May 1 2011, 01:40:40 UTC
This. THIS. THIS IS LIKE AMAZING ASDFGHJKL :Q______
It's not even fair :D

And I think you should write a HenMin side after you finish this story MOAR. WRITE MOAR. Please :D

<3

PS Jungsu Jongwoon interaction. FLUFFY FRIENDSHIP WIN XD

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timmii_luvs May 1 2011, 01:48:08 UTC
Forgot to say this but Wookie's been watching Jongwoon? O_______o For how long? Bet he wanted in Jongie's pants for a while xD *cough* >______>

I swear I pressed the reply option not the comment one ;3;

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dreaminginside May 1 2011, 01:54:38 UTC
Ohoho you picked up on that! Yes, I may tie that one up sometime~(there's a brief hint of it in the first chapter as well) And who wouldn't want in his pants at the sight of him?XD Thank you again :D

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dreaminginside May 1 2011, 01:50:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D

Ahaha, we shall see. It's happened before for them, it could happen again, with proper motivation ;D Rest assured, I will finish thisXD

Ahhh yes, their friendship is an interesting oneXD Thanks for reading and commenting~<3

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