[fic] A Birthday Story

Feb 18, 2010 16:04

Title: A Birthday Story
Author: dreaming_col
Rating: PG
Pairing: none
Genre: general, somewhere between humor and fluff (maybe? At least, that's what was intended... O_o)
Prompt Challenges: from my friend Tia: handcuffs, lipstick; from feyla: pirates; from kratynoi: killer automatic doors, teddy bears
Notes: Originally for the Make a Wish Contest. Umm... VERY ( Read more... )

one-shot, fiction

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Comments 29

cerinityks March 2 2010, 08:24:48 UTC
Wah~! *glomps*

OMG I loved this bb! xD

It's so heartwarming, and I love how their friendship is portrayed ^^ and I love how you wrote Min and showed the progression of his relationship with the others ^^

Great job bb~

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dreaming_col March 2 2010, 19:22:20 UTC
^___^ Thank you, dear!

I was really hoping it would turn out okay, 'cause I am soooooooo not a fluffy-ness writer. But, yes, I'm happy with the way it turned out. :D

♥♥

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kurogoma March 2 2010, 08:39:27 UTC
this is the sort of fic i am such a sucker for. an AU set in school where the underdog who don't fit in find friendship and brotherhood with unlikely people.

changmin is such a dear ~ so shy and awkward and then blossoming into a fine snarky person in the company of his true friends.

i detect a strong jaemin bias what if all the squishing and mothering that jj love to do to min ~ and i am definitely loving that.

this is lovely OT5. thanks! :)

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dreaming_col March 2 2010, 19:28:10 UTC
Yeah, it's one of my favorites to read, too. And I write what I like to read, so I'm happy it worked out in this case. ^^

Ahh, Minnie was so sweet and cooperative with me while I was writing this fic! It was a nice surprise considering how much he tends to fight with me in my other fics. XD

Me? JaeMin bias? Who's that? What's that? Dunno, just get the feeling that Min at 15/16 would very much get that treatment from JaeJae. ^^

Well, thank YOU for the lovely comment! ^___^

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haizul March 2 2010, 14:05:43 UTC
oh gosh idk i'm so happy i feel like crying i loved this so so much thank you ♥

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dreaming_col March 2 2010, 19:29:13 UTC
Awww, thank you~!! Didn't mean to make people cry... T_T But I am happy you liked it that much. ^__^ ♥

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lightly March 2 2010, 16:44:52 UTC
This was STUNNING! I loved it, and I don't normally like fics written in the second person narrative. But this was so well done and just a joy to read.

Awesome!

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dreaming_col March 2 2010, 19:32:09 UTC
Oooh, thank you, dear! I'm glad the second person thing didn't throw you off too much and that you enjoyed it so much. :D

♥♥♥ ^___^

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lliyk December 27 2014, 05:45:03 UTC
um, i'm four years late but this is adorable and it would be very rude and unlike me to not express just how adorable this actually is.

since today is 12/26/14, this fic is insanely accurate to each and every one of them respectively. i love love love your wording, along with the way you have jaej ~casually insert himself into changmin's life, "hey genius, you're having lunch with me," and it's history from there, after he meets yunho and yoochun and junsu. they're all so cute here, planning eachother's birthdays and beating eachother up.

LIKE. IT'S jUST SO ADORABLE. this is cute. everything. about this. is cute.

i'm gonna... i'm gonna go see if everything else you've written is as cute as this please excuse me and prepare yourself for the amount of feedback i will leave you.

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dreaming_col December 27 2014, 06:58:06 UTC
Aww, thank you~! I'm glad you liked it so much. (I can pretty safely say most of my other stuff is nowhere near this cute and fluffy, but hopefully you enjoy all of it anyway. Thanks for the comment, and I look forward to your thoughts on whatever else you choose to read. ^_^

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