[_starcandy Challenge] #95-Broken Limb

May 07, 2013 22:15

Title: Weakness
Rating: R
Genre: AU, horror, (dark) fantasy, angst
Prompt: #95: Broken Limb
Warnings: gore, blood, aftermath of what is essentially a terror attack
Word Count: 1,121
Summary: Many vampires had concerns when the Elders started talking about revealing themselves to the humans. When the war began, these concerns had seemed justified ( Read more... )

starcandy challenge, one-shot, jaemin, fiction

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rikuma May 7 2013, 15:47:24 UTC
would there be a sequel??
sorry I know that sometimes authors don't like people asking that but I just really..really want to know the ending...
DId Changmin die???
Before the boys managed to save him?
Awesome oneshot anyway!!!!..:))

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dreaming_col May 8 2013, 09:57:32 UTC
I don't mind people asking at all. ^^ I have the universe in my head now so I'm not ruling out the possibility of a sequel, but I'm not committing to it either. If it happens, it happens.

As far as Changmin... Well, you can use your imagine to give him whatever ending you feel best. XD (Don't wanna say what I believe happens just in case I do end up writing that sequel... ^_~)

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rikuma May 8 2013, 15:07:01 UTC
keke..:))
well hearing that is as good as being promised a sequel already..:))
since the possibility is there...

And in my mind Changmin will always be fine in the end...:))

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rennie_88 May 8 2013, 13:17:57 UTC
hehhe OMG i read that so fast i need to reread it again XD
i love the angst of course <3 and the vulnerable baby min even more of course <3<3x100~~~ esp when joongies the only one there to take care of him *_* haha of course you're doing the jaemin perfectly again ~~~ *GUSH*
but is this one also going to be more parts??? you just STOPPED it out of no where :( i was just getting into it cuz the first few paragraphs were kinda confusing cuz i didnt know who was talking or what was going on, but then it started unfolding and explaining and then i was all curious whats gonna happen and u just ended it TTTTTTTTTT BOOOo! hahaha tho seriously if u dont have any more for this i cant complain or push u cuz u already have so many other ones all going on at one now :P what to do ~
in short, i enjoyed it and like the characters/set up which is interesting and has lotsa potential, but its kinda a mean tease cuz i wana read more now ToT! haha

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dreaming_col May 8 2013, 13:39:14 UTC
Lol! Yes, slow down and get all the little details. XD

I do JaeMin perfectly, huh? Well, not gonna let that go to my head or anything... ^_~

I'm honestly not sure if this will only be one part or not. The universe is definitely in my head now, and I wouldn't mind writing more for it. Just a matter of if/when inspiration comes. (Can you believe I started writing just from the "perfection to destruction" line popping up in my head? Originally thought it was gonna be the end of a relationship or something, but then it turned into this. O_o)

But, yeah, I'm definitely thinking about it. Kinda playing with the idea of writing the next part from ChunHoSu's side, which would cover what they were out doing, them arriving back at the site, and then the events following that. Like I said, though, we'll see how it goes. ^^

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rennie_88 May 8 2013, 13:47:21 UTC
lol taking the perfection destruction to a whole literal level ..but thats so cool when its vampires :) i wana kno their vampie background stories hahaha!

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dreaming_col May 8 2013, 13:51:42 UTC
Doesn't it, though? XD I never saw it going there when I first started writing it done, but then it just kinda... went. And I'm definitely developing the whole vampire mythology and everything the more I think about the universe. Obviously, the fact that Min's staring up at the sun towards the end shows they're not the typical cliche vampire, but I'm working out all the details. ^^

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dreaming_col May 10 2013, 14:23:46 UTC
More is on the way~~ Wasn't sure if I'd be able to make it happen or not, but I now have about a page or so hand-written for the next part. So we'll see about your happy ending. ^_~

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