Ats - Surrender - PG (Lilah/Wes)

[dreamincolor]

Title: Surrender
Author: dreamincolor
Fandom: Ats
Pairing: Lilah/Wesley
Genre: Romance/Dark
Rating: PG
Highlight for Warnings/Spoilers: **implied character death**
Summary: Her name on his tongue has a terribly familiarity.
Word Count: 1292
Disclaimer: Joss wins.

Beta'd by: the amazing deird1, who's help is invaluable. (-tackle smooch-)
A/N: For prompt #27, "more

Comments

[deird1]

Well, you already know I love this...

Favourite lines:
She was not shaking. She was not holding her breath.

Those beautiful, talented hands.

The cross hit the floor with a clatter.

Gorgeous, hon. *smooches*

[dreamincolor]

I love it when your favorite lines are my favorites, too.

Thanks so much hunny, for everything. You're a dream. -smooches and smothers-

[notquitegood]

This is just fantastic! I love it :-D I can't wait for more. Dark Vamp Wes rocks! Oh by the way did you get my email?

[dreamincolor]

Yay, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. :D Vamp!Wes is fun, isn't he? I may have to write more of him..

My net has been on and off for the last few months (hence my LJ going almost completely entry-less) but I shall drop you a line, now that I'm temporarily home, and with good net access. Miss you, silly!

Anywho, thanks again!

[lawyerfor_satan]

Miss you too!! Ok I'm done with school for the summer now so I'm home all summer and will be online most nights until 1-2am my time. I'm on aim every night after 7pm my time, hope to talk to you soon! :-)

[dreamincolor]

Sweet, alrighty. Well I'm staying with a friend until next weekend, but after that I should be able to catch you on now and again in the evenings. :)

Lovely icon, by the way!

[lavastar]

:O

Whoa! Amazing shit there.

I love how the traditional weak!Wes and strong!Lilah roles are reversed. The imagery fills up the piece beyond a simple predicament, making it truly dark and beautiful.

[dreamincolor]

Hee! Thank you! :D

I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks again for the beautiful comment. You've made my night! -squish-

[tyna_x]

agh, you have no idea how much i love thisss<3
it's perfect.
thank youuu<3

[dreamincolor]

My pleasure! I'm so glad you liked it. <3

[obiwahn]

*shivers in delight*

That was wonderful! How did I miss this??!!

Guh. Vampire Wes is hot.

Is it wrong that I think him turning Lilah is totally romantic? I mean, the fact that he'd want to sire her and not, say, Fred, is totally awesome. Eternal lovers.

*sigh*

Something inside her ached painfully as she weighed the alternative - envisioned a hired hand hunting him down - plunging a stake into his heart, turning him to dust.

Envisioned herself without him.

That part really got to me. So well written as always. Loved this hun! x

[dreamincolor]

That was wonderful! How did I miss this??!!

Prooobably because I never cross-posted it.. -looks around shiftily- Forgetful? Me? Naaah..

I'm so glad you did wander across it, though! You crossed my mind more than once while I was writing it.

Guh. Vampire Wes is hot.

Mm.. -purr- He would be, wouldn't he? The universe needs more of him, me thinks.

Is it wrong that I think him turning Lilah is totally romantic? I mean, the fact that he'd want to sire her and not, say, Fred, is totally awesome. Eternal lovers.

Not at all! That was a lot of what I was going for. Originally I'd actually written a part two, where they talk about why he turned her instead of Fred.. but this just seemed to work better as a stand-alone. But yes..eternal lovers. The very idea makes the fangirl in me implode with squee-age.. I'm so glad you liked it too!

That part really got to me. So well written as always. Loved this hun! xAw, shucks. You're too sweet. -snug- Thanks for the beautiful comment, hunny! It's much appreciated

[obiwahn]

It makes sense to me. As a vampire, Wesley would kill Fred. Probably in a nasty way, Angel-style. Take "Billy," turn up the power to eleven. He'd never see Fred as a partner-in-crime, where she was the object of his devotion and admiration before she'd turn into an object of depraved lust to his vampire-self

[dreamincolor]

Oh - it was certainly written to be romantic. So if you're morbid for thinking so...then so am I!

I actually wrote a sequel to this (which I ended up tossing out because it was mostly smut and violence; in a relaxing-for-me, but relatively-useless, sort of way) that attempted to show how their relationship could evolve once he was free of that pesky conscience.. It also featured a brief discussion on his plans to find and play with Fred, and Lilah's opinion that as long as he had no intention of turning her that it was probably healthy for him to get that "twig-sized Texan" out of his system...in whatever way he could think of.

I could picture vamp Lilah and Wes eventually having a very Darla/Angelus relationship - at least in outward attitude and appearance. Which, like you said, would not bode well for the rest of the AI crew!

Anyway, thanks again for a lovely comment Randall. It's much appreciated. :)