Fic update: The Prisoner and the Hobbit

[dreamflower02]

pandemonium_213 and I have updated our co-written story, "The Prisoner and the Hobbit" over at Many Paths to Tread:

Chapter 5: Of Marbles and Golf

I hope to get my October Challenge posted sometime today, as well!

Comments

[drummerwench]

Man, I just love you guys' updates!

Olorin as therapist is a hoot (he would be a good one)! Also, love how D.L.S. is over-thinking things and Bilbo transparently allows him to see his lined-out thought processes. Mr. Devious vs. Mr. Open-To-All.

Do you have this posted at any other archives? (I am not a member at "Many Paths ...".)

Thanks to both of you for terrific entertainment!

[pandemonium_213]

Thanks muchly, drummerwench! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying their dialog and that their distinctive voices and perspectives are coming through, re: Mr. Devious vs. Mr. Open-to-All. :^D

Olorin as therapist is a hoot (he would be a good one)!

I have always thought so. :^)

Do you have this posted at any other archives?

Not yet although I am entertaining posting it on the SWG. And you're quite welcome. I've found that writing from the Dark Lord's perspective to be oddly therapeutic while dealing with a boatload of work-related stress.

[dreamflower02]

Bilbo has been fun to write in this, as he navigates the tightrope between sympathy for one who was responsible for so much pain and his loyalty to Frodo.

[dreamflower02]

I've just begun to post it at SoA! I have the first couple of chapters up and hope to get the rest up that we have so far, tomorrow. The only thing is that SoA does not support the font-changing format we'd been using, so I had to come up with some other way.