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dreamer_613

Drabble: Water

Apr 04, 2011 20:35

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dreamer_613 April 6 2011, 19:40:54 UTC

Aw, thank you! I was feeling on the fence about this drabble, so I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed some of it.

(Also *WAVE* to you!)

27_jaredjensen April 18 2011, 02:05:14 UTC

I really liked this line: On the bus she thought of the trails of water tunnelling beneath her hair, connecting and diverging. Nice drabble ♥

dreamer_613 April 19 2011, 07:14:49 UTC

I'm glad that the last line really worked for you. I couldn't decide if I was spelling things out too much with that comma bit or not. Thank you for letting me know!