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FMA [Fic] 'Never Meant' Part 4

Dec 25, 2006 00:16

Just in time for a Xmas update, though Xmas has nothing to do with this update, it's simply part 4 of 'Never Meant.' Merry Xmas & Happy New Year everyone!!

( “Edward!” Two nearly identical heads swung around to look at the bespectacled man. The twin reaction wasn’t lost on Alphonse... )

type: gen, series: fullmetal alchemist, au, fanfic

Comments 7

firebird308 December 25 2006, 01:18:07 UTC

“Edward!” Two nearly identical heads swung around to look at the bespectacled man.

That must have been so frigging weird for Hohenhiem. ^_^ And yay for the update.

dreamer1789 December 25 2006, 10:48:45 UTC

Thanks for the review, firebird308!

I didn't realize you were also reading this. Yah, now I've found two people who like this, that should keep me motivated. :D Though right now that isn't the problem, 'cause the characters themselves are working on the script. ;) It's the lack of time on my part. So, we'll see when the next update is... it could in two weeks, it could be in two months (-> exams, people,they're a nightmare) but this ficlet will continue for at least 3 more chapters. (I never plan ahead ^^; )
Anyway, like I said, glad you liked it. Any constructive criticism? Feel free to express in the future. ;)

Merry Xmas!

firebird308 December 25 2006, 20:40:50 UTC

Meanwhile, I have time for mine, but the one char is hiding (not that I entirely blame him; even if I was cursing him out in a post recently) and the other two are sulking over my ignoring their fic in favor of the other. (Have also kind of hit a bit of a '...What the hell am I doing? I think I'm going to need to redo this since I seem to have accidentally killed the mood for them. Whoops.' wall and am probably going to get to figure out what to remove. The thing was supposed to be porn,not 'A Comedy Of Errors'. Arg. (Okay, it isn't that bad...)

Was too busy going 'Yay update!' to go hunting for screw-ups. ^_^; Ahem. Anyway.

The later snapped.

I believe you meant 'latter'.

...strangled chocking noise at the comment.

And 'choking' here.

The tension abated somewhat as doctor Marco stepped back from

The 'd' in 'doctor' should be in caps, since it's being used as a title.

Aaaaand shutting up now. ^_^;

ankoku_tenshi April 14 2007, 23:11:12 UTC

YAY! I found this a long time ago, but gave up hope of it ever starting again. Now, you seem to be catching up....so I'm happy. ^^

dreamer1789 April 15 2007, 11:16:09 UTC

:D Glad to have been of service. It's great fun to write this, though I'll admit I'm taking a break at the moment. There might be a few more drabbles.. (well, there should at least be one more. That's all I can promise right now.)

radcat38 October 27 2007, 02:04:54 UTC

Just read the four chapters and the drabble for Never Meant...loved it. Another AU that was very creative. I hope you finish it someday. It is very good and promising. I loved the remark in Part 1 when Ed's headache hits him with the force of Armstrong at a peace convention. Good one. The mystery of this world is intriquing (spelling?) me. Would love to see where you go with this.

dreamer1789 October 27 2007, 08:04:39 UTC

Pleasantly surprised that you liked it, as that was my first dive into writing FMA.

Lol, well, creativity should go to to hime's bunny. I read that, and I saw what others had written about it, but I envisioned something else (this.) It may have had somthing to do with the fact that I'd just finished watching the anime series. ^^; It was that ultimate moment when you write a character for the first time and you think: "Ok, I think I've figured them out. Now they're mine to play with." *evil grin*

The problem was - I found out after 4 parts, while working on #5 - that there's just so many 'directions' it can go from here. It felt as good a place as any to go on hiatus, and leave the rest up to the reader's imagination. ^^;