Fic: Blurred Blue Lines - Part 3 (Ensemble, Sharon Raydor- The Closer) - M

[dreamaway78]

Title: Blurred Blue Lines- Part 3

Word Count: 1980
Rating: M

Fandom: Closer

Characters: Ensemble, Sharon Raydor

Warnings: Language, Mention of Assault and Violence

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters. No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: Major Crimes has had their share of cases where the violence of the crimes committed caused its

Comments

[lindy999]

You are building an amazing story here. Your level of detail is wonderful. I feel like I'm watching a real Closer episode.

[dreamaway78]

You always say the nicest things. I am so glad you are liking the story so far.

[hugamoose]

Great Great Chapter I loved it and I agree with lindy999 its like watching an episode, I was not expecting that at the ending it make you wonder who else is involved and why they killed Hudson, which makes me believe that he knows the perpetrators and I am wondering if they are LAPD to or other officers are at the root of the issue, after all she has but a few officers in jail. cant wait for more I hope its not to long before you update again.

[dreamaway78]

I am glad you are enjoying the story. Hopefully you still enjoy it as it continues. I almost want to give you hints about where it is going but then I remember River Song and her constance use of the word spoilers.

I am writing, I just need to clean it up more before I dare let anyone else read it.

[rebakathy]

I think because I've been a fan of Mary McDonnell for such a long time that I immediately like any character she becomes. I get mighty defensive with all the crap that is thrown at her by Major Crimes on the show. Glad to see some respect toward her in your story.

I really feel for Alvarez and his bewilderment that none of what happened was supposed to have happened. Can't wait for more.

[dreamaway78]

Oh I love Mary too. She is awesome.

On the show I see the character of Sharon Raydor as the arch-rival of Brenda, therefore they will always be butting heads. But the with the Old Money episode and the ones that follow so that maybe they are coming to terms with each other.

Glad you are liking the story.

[tmrfrisky]

I love this story and the way you are building it. i can't wait to see what happens next.

[dreamaway78]

I am glad you like it. Hopefully you will continue to like it as the story continues.

[dreamaway78]

It is a little, even when writing it. I am so glad you like it.