Sheer Dumb Luck part 8

May 23, 2009 21:21

Sheer Dumb Luck
Part Eight
By Dreaming of Everything AKA dream_it_all AKA dreams_of_all, betaed by mmouse15
Series: Transformers 2007
Ratings/Warnings: M for sex and possible language, plus sexual themes. Warnings for multiple partner scenes and themes, plug-and-play, slash. Updated G1 characters.
Characters/Pairings: Ratchet, Constructicons, Ratchet/Constructicons. (Yes, all of ( Read more... )

transformers, fic, transformers 2007, sheer dumb luck, slash

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tainry May 24 2009, 07:36:16 UTC
Ahhh, mmmmm, lovely! Heee! Scavenger's like the Fireflight of the Structies! <3
And bless you, I needed the distraction after TF:Animated. ;_;

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dream_it_all June 8 2009, 03:07:48 UTC
Thank you so much! And Scavenger--yep, pretty much! He's sooo adorable! ^_^ (Kind of devious too, though. XD He cracks me up!)

And you're more than welcome--I've been putting off seeing the TFA final episode for just that reason. D:

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dream_it_all June 8 2009, 03:25:39 UTC
I know, right? And I have to say, this chapter will not be particularly out-of-the-ordinary compared to most of the following ones. XD When I start the sexing, I apparently pull out all the stops...

Thank you so much! I always love getting your comments! ♥ ♥ ♥

And the lack of specifics is A-OK! I just--thank you! Again! (Argh, I feel so unoriginal! DX)

Oooo, you picked up on Scavenger's tail wrapping around Ratchet's leg! I just love that bit, it's just so him, you know? XD All touch-feely and clingy and kind of sneaky about it sometimes and adorable. And Ratchet's so much fun to write right now, with his changing feelings and the confliction and everything! (Okay, maybe I'm a bit too excited about this fic right now. ^_^; That's always possible...)

So thank you so much again! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! ♥

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poptartodoom May 24 2009, 16:56:15 UTC
oooh, yay! Scavvie is my favorite, I'm glad he was the first one to approach Ratchet about anything. ^_^ This is a sweet little chapter. Great job! I can't wait to see the rest, I've been eager about this story since you started it.

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dream_it_all June 8 2009, 03:32:44 UTC
Yaaay!

Scavenger's one of my favorites, too--top 3, in fact. ^_^ (After Mixmaster and Bonecrusher, but they both come into their own a little bit later on. XD) So he shows up a lot--it helps that he's a lot more friendly than some of the others, and that he shows up more often.

Which is the same reason why he's the one to approach Ratchet in this chapter! He's also kind of shameless, that's the other reason. XD

But I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter! I'm working on the rest, and it should be up pretty soon--we're getting to the exciting part! And I'll have more time once my summer break starts, of course.

Thank you again--I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

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raisedbymoogles May 24 2009, 19:48:03 UTC
Fwee! I wasn't expecting the slash, but it was woven in so naturally. (God, Scavvie, you adorable little muffin you.)

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dream_it_all June 8 2009, 03:40:33 UTC
Thank you! And sorry to spring something on you--I thought I'd warned for it, but maybe not? ^_^; But natural is good! It's what I'm going for, in fact--I like to write romances where the relationship is more an extension of the friendship than it is anything else. ^_^

(He is soooo cute, isn't he? XD I just want to snuggle him whenever I write him! Which would be...hard. XD And possibly ill-advised~!)

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raisedbymoogles June 8 2009, 08:33:30 UTC
You probably did warn, but I am a fluffbrain. ^_^ I saw you'd updated and went "Ooh! Pounce!" But yes. Natural is good! :D

(We'll just have to snuggle him vicariously through Ratchet or something. ;P)

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dream_it_all July 5 2009, 05:27:50 UTC
Well, that's good to hear! *whew* It is a deep, deep concern of mine that I will end up messing up some day, and ending up with a rabid fan going after me for not labeling slash/het/threesomes/moresomes/whatever. ^_^; Partially because I don't need people yelling at me, and partially because I know there's things I'd really rather avoid, and I don't want to do that to someone else. D:

But thank you! Again! <3

(I sometimes think about how much I identify with Ratchet, and then I get depressed and need to go have a good lie-down. DX But oooo yes, vicarious snuggling! ♥ And I don't think Scavenger's going to complain at all about Ratchet-snuggling. XD)

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catraven May 24 2009, 23:59:42 UTC
VERY nice. :D This story is progressing so naturally. And it makes so much sense that Scavenger is the one to make the move.

Good job. More please!

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dream_it_all June 8 2009, 03:51:54 UTC
Thank you so much!

This story is progressing so naturally.

Thank you again! This really means a lot to me--the most important thing to me when I'm writing a romance, even (especially?) one as convoluted as this one, is that it feel natural, not contrived or artificial or anything like that, so--thank you!

And it makes so much sense that Scavenger is the one to make the move.

Ooo, I agree! (Well, of course--I did write it like that. XD) But to me, it needed to be a Constructicon who would make the first move, since Ratchet's so torn--plus, he's got years of working closely with mechs he's repairing, when it would absolutely not be okay for him to get involved with them, so that's almost habit, and then he's just kind of bad at recognizing what he needs. XD ( ... )

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