FIC: Sheer Dumb Luck 7

[dream_it_all]

Sheer Dumb Luck
Part Seven
By Dreaming of Everything AKA dream_it_all AKA dreams_of_all, betaed by mmouse15
Series: Transformers 2007
Ratings/Warnings: M for sex and possible language, plus sexual themes. Warnings for multiple partner scenes and themes, plug-and-play, slash. Updated G1 characters.
Characters/Pairings: Ratchet, Constructicons, Ratchet/Constructicons. (Yes, all of

Comments

[dream_it_all]

This is kind of a varied chapter, isn't it? All over the map!

And yeah, action! Finally! (Oh man, I'm so bad at action scenes ;_;)

But frantic is what I try for, so yay, it worked! (I'm pretty tired, if this review reply seems kind of fractured--sorry! I am not at my best and brightest.)

Ratchet strikes me as a good leader--if he was chief medic, he needed to be able to keep his head cool in emergencies, many of them, and he needed to be able to direct staff efficiently and effectively. And yes, he totally talks to himself--partially because it's just who he is and partially because he's used to having other medics around to understand him. XD

I'm so glad that that scene was so effective, so thank you! It's pretty pivotal.

And I'm glad the passage of time worked too! It's another bit I struggle with--I never know quite what to do--and I wanted the frustration of waiting for something to come up, the way it feels when something's hanging over your shoulders--and to me, that seems like the kind of thing that would drive Ratchet

[poptartodoom]

Augh! I've been waiting on pins and needles for a new chapter and you ended on that! *Kermitflail!* But I love it. Ratchet is adorable, and Scavvie is always cute, no matter what. Mix needs some cuddles, once he won't melt anyone who touches him...

[dream_it_all]

Thank you so much! And I'm so sorry! But now the new chapter's up so hopefully that's all better? *flails too*

I'm glad you like it! I feel just the way you do about the characters, too--Ratchet is adorable (he would deny that so hard) and Scavenger is just too cute for words (which he would deny too, less convincingly) and Mixmaster d'awwww ;_; *wibbles* (sorry for incoherency, he does that to me, and I'm tired) gets a chapter all to his own later on, just for cuddles!

So anyway, thank you again! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! ^_^

Chapter 7

[dreamerchaos]

Yea!

Got a chance to reread it yet again! The joy and awesomeness blossoms!! XD

Re: Chapter 7

[dream_it_all]

Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying the re-read--and hopefully it's a little more polished this time around. ^_^ I've finally had the chance to get some editing done!

[catraven]

Wonderful! I'm so glad you're continuing this!

Grrrrr. I usually like Starscream, but not when he's fragging the Constructicons! Poor Mix! And owies for Long Haul! Wah!

Yay, Ratchet! Way to fulfill the Hippocratic Oath!

[dream_it_all]

I'm definitely continuing! It takes a lot to get me to abandon a story--Sheer Dumb Luck is absolutely going to be completed!

I sometimes like Starscream, but my poor Constructicons! Mixmaster! Long Haul! *cuddles* And yay Ratchet indeed! He is just so awesome in this chapter. ^_^

Thank you for the incredible review--I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

[geotropism]

Happy to see you're continuing this! I like the fast pace of it towards the end, can't wait to see what happens next! :)

[dream_it_all]

Thank you very much for your comment!

I'm glad you're happy to see more! And yes--finally, some action! ;) I'm also glad I'm keeping your interest. ^_^

I did finally get the next bit up--I hope you continue to enjoy the story!