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And Eyes 8

Nov 09, 2008 21:56

And Eyes That I Might See
Chapter 8

Series: Transformers 2007
Ratings/Warnings: T for safety, but nothing worse than mild language.
Characters/Pairings for this chapter: Amanda (OC), Bluestreak, Sunstreaker
Summary: The Autobots get cornered in a canyon after a Decepticon attack, along with a handful of humans. Unfortunately, Amanda is blind, ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

cazcatharsis November 10 2008, 15:58:25 UTC

first off, before I even read this beast... YAYYYYYYYYYYYY! I've been waiting for an update to this for so long! *huggle*
okay, i go read now
Sunny's gonna get an asskicking.
From me.
"Thing" my ass.
Okay, he's acting a little civil. grouchy, real, but civil. Okay i can hug him now. LOL
"I'm the best looking"... you dink. hahahha
good god... a battle you can't see. It's hard enough to see through the haze but completely blind to what's coming? That'd be even scarier.

dream_it_all January 3 2009, 06:35:51 UTC

CAZ! YOU'RE WELCOME! I'M ALWAYS SO HAPPY TO HEAR FROM YOU!

XD Ohhh, Sunny, you are such an aft~~~! He's tons of fun to write in this 'verse, honest-to-God. He's a total bastard but a pretty decent one, all things considered.

Other news: "dink" is the best insult ever and it fits him so fantastic!!!
We abuse him so.

Yeeeeah, I feel so so bad for Amanda. >.> I do awful things to her...Seriously, it's one of the freakiest things I can imagine, to be totally helpless like that.

sister_dear November 10 2008, 22:17:37 UTC

I absolutely love that Sunstreaker is the one she's getting along with and Sideswipe is the one she can't stand. And the Sunstreaker/Sideswipe/Blustreak dynamic we're getting hints of is wonderful. *two thumbs up* :D

Loved that little moment of 'I don't like any of them! Well, maybe him, and okay, they're not bad, and... I guess it's just Sideswipe.' Kinda showing she's getting herself a bit back together mentally, though it looks like all the progress made in her 'get it together' time might be about to get blown out of the water. D:

dream_it_all January 10 2009, 20:46:55 UTC

Thank you so, so much!!!

I had fun playing around with the way things usually go with Sunstreaker and Sideswipe--I like to turn things on their heads, sometimes! And I just really like Sunstreaker and Sideswipe and Bluestreak all playing off of each other, so thank you for that, too!

Loved that little moment of 'I don't like any of them! Well, maybe him, and okay, they're not bad, and... I guess it's just Sideswipe.' Kinda showing she's getting herself a bit back together mentally, though it looks like all the progress made in her 'get it together' time might be about to get blown out of the water. D:

XD I had fun writing that bit! Poor Amanda's a little conflicted at the moment... But yep, she's pulling herself back together. She's had lots of help, after all!

As for the end to the progress--things get better? XD I am such a sucker for happy endings. So there's that. But yeah, it's not a happy beginning-of-chapt.-9 for her.