[fic] To love, to hold, to fuck things up 4/4 - Epilogue

[drcalvin]

To love, to hold, to fuck things up
    Epilogue: Everyone else fucks up too

Author: drcalvinPairing: Italy/Germany/Prussia

Comments

[zumie_ashlen]

Ahh, seeing this fic cleaned up was so wonderful! *-* It's been a favorite of mine for a while.

I loved all the new additions you slipped in--especially in regards to Germany. Seeing more things from his side gave him much greater depth than what he originally had, I think.

And the knowledge that you're working on a sequel makes me happy beyond belief. I can't wait! <3

[drcalvin]

Thank you ^_^

Yes, Germany needed fleshing out. I wrote the original in such a rush, that a lot of what I thought and knew just didn't make it into the text.

[kayoshybrid]

Well now, when can I expect more awkward porn suggestions from Germany and someone riding like a hoe?

[drcalvin]

/does the fancy anime-laugh

Ohohohoho~

That, my dear, is for me to not have a clue about know, and you to discover ;)

[kayoshybrid]

As long as there is a slight possibility of Germany riding or being ridden, I have no complaint. Mmmmmm. x

[pinkuchokoreeto]

Hey, I found your journal on fanfiction.net. I must say you have great style, and I instantly fall in love! <3 I read just one your fiction (this one, to be precise) but be sure I will read your older works too. (Time, time, I know what you mean that you are busy with school and life… X_X )

And about this one… How could you end in that moment?! Awww… I’m looking forward to read the sequel, if you end it. :D This threesome is perfect, I never thought I will find so good story about them together. :D

And the sentence from part two “Oh, dear God in heaven. This was Prussia flirting.” Made me laugh so much, I fell to the floor… :D

[drcalvin]

Hello there ^^

Thank you so much for your kind comments!

Prussia thinks his flirting is elegant, smooth and basically made of PURE AWESOME. The rest of the world... disagrees ;)

[avyquinn]

**"You know," Germany said and cleared his throat, trying to ignore the sudden heat filling his stomach. "I... I saw this movie once. Of, ehm, one guy sitting on top of another and I..."
"I've always kinda wondered what that was like. To have someone... ride you, like that." **

Me too, Germany. Meeee too. *gets Japan's camera ready!* Hold onto that thought...

God I love this story. I was a little sad when there were no free German hands though, to be completely honest. You wrote their encounter well, but I would have liked for one of the brothers to be free. Alas...

Somehow, though, I think you'll get to that in the sequel. I can hardly wait. *rubs hands together*

thanks for commenting!

[drcalvin]

Ah, well, this time Italy got them. Perhaps, in the future, there will have to be some payback for that? ^^

Glad to hear you liked it

[luridlurker]

I'm late to read, late to comment, forgive me

[drcalvin]

Thank you so much for this comment ^^ I'm glad you liked how it switches between silly comedy and a bit more drama, it's one of the things I feel Hetalia fic really has potential to do well. So to hear someone thinks I managed it is high praise indeed ^_ ^