[fic] To love, to hold, to fuck things up 3/4

Nov 29, 2010 00:18

Title: To love, to hold, to fuck things up
Author: drcalvinPairing: Italy/Germany/Prussia ( Read more... )

long, myfic, series, hetalia, adult

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:o numbuhp November 29 2010, 00:10:07 UTC
/nosebleedofdeath
That is my facial expression after this story. Glad to know you're better!
I nearly passed out when I saw that this updated.

Can't wait for the epilogue!!

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/gives you cotton for the nose drcalvin November 29 2010, 00:12:45 UTC
Oh, thank you ^_^ Glad it pleased, hehe

No worries, it wasn't any omg!serious! illness, just had to catch up with work and school and stuff afterwards

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kayoshybrid November 29 2010, 02:02:23 UTC
You couldn't possibly understand my adoration, admiration and excitedment in response to this story. Someone finally filled my love of GerItaPru without being a oneshot, with PLOT, with bountiful humour, with a realistic love triangle, realistic, erotic and paced sex, unrivaled imagery and delicious detail. You have made a fan, a writer and a reader a very, VERY happy person ( ... )

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drcalvin November 29 2010, 18:45:54 UTC
Thank you SO much! I'm so happy that people like it! This is my first threesome ever, and I've done a lot of angsting about how to show what they all feel and whatnot

/does the happydance of squee <(^^<)

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\o/ drcalvin November 29 2010, 18:43:58 UTC
You might or might not understand what it's like to wake up, look out the window and see a miserable winter day... and then turn on the comp and get a comment like THIS! Suddenly, the snow is dancing and lil' Christmas angels are singing the Axis version of Santa Claus is coming to town all over ^^

So, just... thank you. And I'm also really grateful you took the time to point out which bits worked best for you!

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runciblespork November 29 2010, 04:14:56 UTC
I adored this on the kink meme (didn't comment, though, as I'm one of those weirdos who doesn't want to take up comment space with anon!fapping) and it's a wonderful pleasure to read it here.

Normally, I'm all "Germancest? Yes! GerIta/PruIta? NO!" but they truly do balance and click the way you've written them. Not too sappy, not too superficial, all with layers and bubbling desires punctuated with some charming twists of phrases. I'll definitely be printing the entire fic and keeping it to re-read when I can't access my LJ memories.

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^_^ drcalvin November 29 2010, 18:41:48 UTC
Ohh, thank you so super much ^_^

The way they balance each other was a surprise to me too, to be honest. Only as I was writing did I start to think, hmm, this really could work - somehow, their fail cancels each others fail out a bit, heh

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mykonos2 November 29 2010, 09:22:00 UTC
I always loved this fill *___*

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drcalvin November 29 2010, 18:46:24 UTC
Glad to hear it ^^ And thank you that you took the time to comment!

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closeincline November 30 2010, 16:04:25 UTC
Oh my god, this was so awesome -nosebleed- one of the better threesomes I have ever read, you did an awesome job! Thanks for posting!!

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drcalvin December 1 2010, 07:01:36 UTC
And thank you for commenting =) Glad to hear you liked it!

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