[fanfic] The kind of sins we pretend not to engage in 1/1

[drcalvin]

Title: The kind of sins we pretend not to engage in

Comments

[mogumogu]

Yeah, I eat lust-crazed stuff like this up... and vulnerable Germany stuff, too.

(I can't help but wonder just what France's plans for Italy were, other than the obvious)

I'm vaguely reminded of this one FFVII doujinshi. It wasn't particularly notable, but it was cracktastically entertaining in that it involved (a particularly underage-looking) Cloud hiding out in a closet making use of a cucumber that Aeris was looking for to complete her special salad (in the end, the cucumber was returned to her and the salad was made, much to Cloud's horror).

I mention this because the cucumber in question was one of those dainty Japanese cucumbers and not, say, a manly American cucumber (UNF).

So.... what kind of cucumber are we dealing with?

(eep! sorry for not answer earlier)

[drcalvin]

I missed replying to your comment. So sorry

The cucumber *drumroll* is a mystery, ahaha! Although of course it's a French cucumber, le duh ;)

I can't help but wonder just what France's plans for Italy were, other than the obvious

Well, I think he wanted to xxxx his *bleep*, touch Italy's *bleep* and then have the other Italy xxxx his XXXX while he *bleep*ed them both. Something like that?

[kibabozu17]

I really liked the beginning of this fic, but just a quick suggestion: I only really care for Germancest when Germany is the Seme and Prussia is the Uke, and in your description of the fic you put "Pairings: Germany/Prussia + secondary pairing France/Prussia". With Germany's name first, coming before Prussia, this implies that Germany is the Seme in the story, and Prussia is the Uke. I am not trying say that you can't write stories how you want with the characters having the sexual roles you want them to have, I am just suggesting that in order to prevent future readers from getting the wrong idea of who's going to be penetrating who,(In case someone really hates it one way or another) you should consider how you list the names in the pairing description. As a general yaoi fanfic rule, the first name listed=Seme and second name listed=uke

[drcalvin]

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked at least parts of the fic :)

Thing is, they switch in this fic - first Prussia does Germany, then the other way around - so I didn't bother writing out the seme/uke order. In most of my fic headers, I try to do that, since I usually have one or the other top in the fics, but now always.

Anyway, if you want 100% Germany topping, Take flight and More than a brick has that :)

[kibabozu17]

Okay, I guess I should have read further, but I got a little...turned off with the first situation I guess. My bad! Hopefully I didn't offend you. D:

Thank you so much for links to the other two fics! I really appreciate it, because like I said, I love your writing style and the way you present the characters. Once my last final is over, I am going to read them ASAP! Thanks! (and sorry again for posting my first comment without having fully read the story! ): )

[drcalvin]

No, no, we all have our preferences! With the German brothers, I like switching it up, but with certain other characters I'm strictly a top or bottom fan.

Thank you again for leaving a comment on the fic, despite the fact that the scenario wasn't to your liking.

Good luck with finals!