Wow, I like it. It was strong until the last line, I think. Something to express the sorrowfulness would have been better, in my opinion. Other than that, it's good.
This was written for someone else. & Concerning the last line, I wasn't sure if I wanted to end it that way or another way. I showed it to a friend and he said he liked it this way so that's what I went with.
never cuz i was eaten alive by squirrels! hehehahaha. fun with Brukner animals... but probably this week sometime? monday & wed. ive got competition in Grove city...I think....this saturday, so we can probably do something depending on when i get back from that. ill talk to you later! *hugs and kisses* cyaye
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but probably this week sometime? monday & wed. ive got competition in Grove city...I think....this saturday, so we can probably do something depending on when i get back from that. ill talk to you later! *hugs and kisses* cyaye
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