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Rose of Tears - Valentine's Challenge Prompt 1

Jan 25, 2012 10:24

Title: Rose of Tears
Author: leopion
Rating: PG
Word Count: 431
Notes/Warnings:A bit bloody but nothing too serious. Written for prompt 1: Roses/detention/antidote (though some words are more important than the other ;D).

( He was coughing up blood. )

leopion, 101-500, valentine2012

Comments 11

alexia_drake January 25 2012, 03:17:05 UTC

I almost had the same reaction that Hermione had at the end, with my breath. lol I guess I got into it, and I was scrared/sad for Draco.

Nicely done.

leopion January 25 2012, 07:22:16 UTC

I guess I love Draco too much to let him die like that. Thank you for the lovely comment!

xfsista January 25 2012, 04:05:56 UTC

Guh. This is lovely. Very evocative in so few words. <3

leopion January 25 2012, 07:24:25 UTC

Thank you! <3

crissytje January 25 2012, 21:25:47 UTC

Waw you almost had me there :p I'm sooo glad the rose was sufficient :) ^^ good job

leopion January 26 2012, 07:13:08 UTC

Thank you :)

kansol_encore January 26 2012, 21:37:05 UTC

Aw, Leo! You had me wringing my wrist with this one. The last sentence was a delight to read and I love how you wove bits of redeemed!Draco into the drabble. <3

leopion January 28 2012, 23:15:22 UTC

THANK YOU, KANDY! I love how you noticed that. After all, I can't very well let the only thing our dear Draco did be 'lie there dying', can I? <3

ningloreth February 13 2012, 10:40:15 UTC

OMG, the suspense!

A lovely, dark drabble with a much-needed happy ending!

leopion February 14 2012, 12:06:38 UTC

Thank you! <3