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patience is a virtue (prompt 1)

Feb 08, 2010 21:21

Title: Patience Is A Virtue
Author: savepureness
Rating: G
Word Count: 596
Notes: Written for the dramionedrabble 2010 Valentine's Day 7 Kisses Challenge - Prompt 1: First Kiss
( patience is a virtue )

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savepureness February 11 2010, 07:58:52 UTC

As I was saying, I think I'm growing quite fond of that line myself.

silvia_elisa February 9 2010, 00:05:28 UTC

Wicked!

It was so intense and paranoid!

savepureness February 11 2010, 07:58:17 UTC

*laughs*

It's good to hear that!

terrayn February 9 2010, 00:55:39 UTC

Malice, the result of years and years of practice, of playing the perfectly composed, cold and calculated boy; the miniature golden boy who secretly dreamed to save the world.

This line made me shiver. Good job with setting the mood and getting the atmosphere just right!

savepureness February 11 2010, 07:55:45 UTC

Thank you! I became quite fond of that line as well, LOL.

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savepureness February 11 2010, 07:54:30 UTC

*giggles*

Why thank you! I wouldn't qualify it exactly as "amazing", but I do try, you know.

alexia_drake February 10 2010, 03:49:19 UTC

It's nicely written, great job :)

savepureness February 11 2010, 07:53:18 UTC

Thank you - it's so nice of you to leave me a comment!