The Beautiful Square at Midnight

Nov 08, 2009 18:52


Title: The Beautiful Square at Midnight
Author: somandalicious
Rating: G
Word Count: 618
Notes/Warning: This drabble was initially written for the recent challenge at dramione_ldws , but as I went to post it, I saw that the word limit was 350. Needless to say I had to axe a lot of it out, but I promised myself that after the challenge was over, I was going to post the original ( Read more... )

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dollfaced November 9 2009, 01:35:01 UTC
I voted for the shortened version, it was my favorite of the bunch, so I'm very happy that you posted the original length one. Really nice work, love the intensity.

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alexia_drake November 9 2009, 04:14:40 UTC
Nice drabble, it's well written :)

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atalanta84 November 9 2009, 05:06:31 UTC
She couldn’t fail the ministry, and so instead, she chose to fail her heart.

There's just something so perfect about that line. This is such a beautiful ficlet. I loved the shorter one, but this version is even better yet!

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pokecharm November 9 2009, 13:14:05 UTC
I've been zoning out on voting, but this is really well written! I like the long version - you have a good knack for detail :)

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