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Contrition, Valentine's Challenge - Day 2, Prompt 2

Feb 09, 2009 23:54

Title: Contrition
Author: drcjsnider
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 312
Notes/Warning: Written for Day 2 Valentine’s Challenge, Prompt 2. I'm sorry I am so late. Bollocksed up at work again, I fear. Millions down the drain.

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drcjsnider February 10 2009, 05:24:22 UTC

Thanks... i figured he has got to become more thoughtful than he was in the books if he'd ever have a chance with Hermione

sunflowerkudi February 10 2009, 05:24:08 UTC

aww, cute

madeleone February 10 2009, 06:10:59 UTC

Awwww, I like this Draco. He acts like it is just a piddling little thing he has done, but obviously he has put forth much effort to make her happy. What a sweet gesture....he's a keeper. :)

drcjsnider February 11 2009, 02:57:07 UTC

*nod* i think it's important for him to demonstrate his sincerity

sarahyyy February 10 2009, 08:01:30 UTC

I love that Hermione said "I adore you" instead of something like "I love you". The former is still more powerful, in my opinion. =D Lovely drabble! I was smiling the whole way through.

drcjsnider February 11 2009, 02:58:15 UTC

Ah thanks... i figured that maybe it was too soon for 'i love' but 'i adore' conveys a similar sentiment without the scariness of early claims of 'love'

reetinkerbell February 10 2009, 09:50:18 UTC

I adore this. :P It was lovely. It seems like a very Draco thing to do, I think. I enjoyed it very much.

(I had been cooling her heels for - you mean 'my heels'?)

drcjsnider February 11 2009, 02:59:04 UTC

Ah thanks... and yes its a typo! I switched it over to first person after I was half done and obviously miss that one!

reetinkerbell February 11 2009, 06:27:35 UTC

I thought that might be it. I've done it many times myself. :P