DUET 5: hiddenhibernian and tygermine

[ningloreth]

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Title: Beacons of Light
Author: hiddenhibernian
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8,000
Summary: After the war, the battle for the Ministry's soul is fought over at interminable

Comments

[ningloreth]

You've combined so many elements in this story -- I love all the humour, especially drunken!Draco:

“Sorry. I'm sorry. That was very inappopr - inapprorpia - inappapp - not the right thing to say.”

...but he was too busy falling off his barstool to be certain.

LOL! And clueless Ron (and Hermione's acid remark):

"...I started feeling a bit chilly.”

“If only you'd had a jumper,” Hermione mumbled, rolling her eyes.

And, of course, Hermione's last line!

But what I like most about the story is that, in only 8000 words, you've created a real sense of a relationship progressing, Hermione coming to terms with her unexpected feelings, Draco hovering on the brink of 'doing the right thing' and marrying Astoria, and then the quiet way they come together at the end.

[tygermine]

I loved this! You spun my prompts into a brilliant story.

Thank you and well done!

[ariel_riddle]

I thoroughly enjoyed this story!
Super impressed with how you were able to develop such a full relationship between them with in a one-shot.
Well done!

[articcat621]

This is amazing <3 I loved it. I loved your portrayal of everyone here, especially Draco and Ron. Nicely done <3