DUET 2: jaynedlm and PierreJ92

[ningloreth]

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Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Author: JayneDLM
Rating: K
Word Count: 3678
Summary: Hermione's words are more powerful than she realises, and it is her work

Comments

[pierrej92]

This was wonderful! I really loved that they bonded over magic and that shy, sweet kiss at the end topped off the change in Draco!!
I love that you included things like Facebook and Twitter. Wingdings made me laugh, because I think I've had that exact conversation with my mum!
I really enjoyed reading this! Thank you so so so much!

[ariel_riddle]

Oh this was delightful!
Malfoy losing his magic was hysterical.
His curiosity towards all things muggle gave me so much life and I could see how Hermione would enjoy teaching him a thing or two about her world, especially when he seems to be soaking it up with so much enthusiasm, however initially reluctant.
I laughed when he found the pics of Hermione in her scantily clad dress, showing him she has a wild side.
I was glad that they were able to to solve the mystery through the aid of muggle technology and that Draco let his guard down and celebrated with the rest of them. Of course I could see why part of Hermione would wish he could stay like that, but then at the end when they share that moment, it was just perfection and everything tied up so nicely. Lovely story!

[bentnotbroken1]

Ok I really loved all of Draco's interactions and questions regarding all the social media things. It was hilarious.

Good job. I felt like this was really light hearted and it was lovely to read.

[floorcoaster]

The premise to this story was interesting - solving a magical problem with the aid of Muggle methods! Very cool. This was a nice glimpse into the start of Draco being more understanding. Kudos for that!

[darkcivet]

This was really nice. Light-hearted fun. :)