DUET 5: ochre_101 and darkcivet

Aug 30, 2016 06:35

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Title: The Curious Case of Malfoy and Granger
Author: ochre_101
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4013
Summary: A pesky ferret. Check. A fed-up bachelorette. Check. Unrequited ( Read more... )

!round 8 2016!, rating: pg-13

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Comments 15

darkcivet August 30 2016, 07:03:30 UTC
I can't actually remember my prompts (doozy of a headache), but I enjoyed this fic very much. Hermione's attitude was fun to read, most of all. Thank-you so much for writing it. :D

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ochre_101 August 30 2016, 12:35:38 UTC
I'm so glad you like it. :D I was slightly worried it won't be up to the par. :D

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ningloreth August 31 2016, 08:45:13 UTC
I love all the banter between D & H, and the way it's clear they care for each other underneath. My favourite bits are

“Malf--” Another interruption.

“Draco. You should be acquainted with my first name by now, Hermione,” he said, with smiling eyes and a gentle squeeze of her hands.

“I suppose so, Draco.”

and the epilogue, where they've dropped their defences, but Draco's still wise-cracking.

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ochre_101 August 31 2016, 11:41:44 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm so pleased you liked it. I loved writing their interactions. :D

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ariel_riddle August 31 2016, 09:52:07 UTC
What an entertaining read!
Hermione during the blind dates was hilarious.
The Dramione back and forth was awesome.
Granger, you won’t kill me, love. Who is going to be the object of your fantasies if you do?
^^I love this line.
The ending was very nice.
I'm glad they confessed their feelings for each other!

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ochre_101 August 31 2016, 11:43:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. It's one of my first ever fics I'm making public on the internet and getting a positive response is absolutely thrilling. Thank you. :D

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naarna August 31 2016, 11:37:20 UTC
Aaaaawwwww... You had me grin throughout the story. :-)

I loved the banter, and the almost kiss in the office was one of my favourite parts.

Fun read!

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ochre_101 August 31 2016, 11:46:19 UTC
Thank you Thank you Thank you! I'm smiling so wide on hearing of the positive comments. I'm happy you liked it. :D

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unseen1969 September 2 2016, 11:44:34 UTC
Oh, this was a lovely story. Loved the string of failed blind dates, but I especially enjoyed the obvious sexual tension between our favorite couple. Draco and his eyes of "liquid storm" is hot. Yum!

Their dance (and the crowd's reaction) was my favorite part. So warm and sensual!

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ochre_101 September 8 2016, 10:34:41 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for the lovely comment. It made my day. I'm so pleased you liked it.

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