Duet 4: teenage_hustler and tygermine

Oct 31, 2013 12:17

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Title: She Believed In Me
Author: teenage_hustler
Rating: PG, for some snogging and some swearing.
Word Count: 5,950
Summary: The night before the 10th anniversary of the final ( Read more... )

!round 5 2013!, rating: pg

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tygermine October 31 2013, 15:20:18 UTC
Thank you for the amazing gift. I had to go back and see what prompts I sent you and you chose the hardest one and pulled it off in a way I never thought possible.

i love the flashbacks and Draco whining about the speech and how its sprung on you that they're married when they're still snarky. LOVE IT!!!

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teenage_hustler October 31 2013, 19:46:03 UTC
Thank you! I had to look up my prompts with your gift too, and I can't believe you got them all in!
Thanks so much again for my gift.

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unseen1969 October 31 2013, 17:46:13 UTC
AH, the confidence a spouse can instill in you is wonderful. Well done! Love that he used the underwear idea and the terrible joke, after all. :-D

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teenage_hustler November 2 2013, 19:32:17 UTC
Thank you!
Hehe, yeah. Call it an homage to the Weasleys. :)

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ningloreth October 31 2013, 20:31:30 UTC
Like tygermine, I love the way you sneakily keep the fact that they're married from us until you've convinced us that they're still 'enemies' who fancy each other. I also love the way you show us that Draco has to work quite hard at being snarky with her, partly because he knows she's a match for him, and partly because he loves her.

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teenage_hustler November 2 2013, 19:35:59 UTC
Aww, thank you! I can't imagine a relationship between them not containing snark. It's just not possible.
Thanks again for being amazing.

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rylr October 31 2013, 23:04:18 UTC
Oh, that was lovely! This story hit all the right notes. The way you managed to outline Hermione and Draco's love story while keeping Draco absolutely in character was excellent. Well done!

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teenage_hustler November 2 2013, 19:36:30 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading!

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captainraychill November 2 2013, 01:24:04 UTC
Excellent banter!!! You know the Dramione dynamic in a story is good when Draco has only called his wife Hermione a handful of times. :) This was really well-done - the present and the memories handled beautifully. My favorite part was Draco's conversion with the little Slytherin.

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teenage_hustler November 2 2013, 19:38:11 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment. I was trying to work out how to best show Draco as not-a-git. The conversation with the first year seemed to work. Thanks for reading.

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