Duet 06 -- namelessamelie and xfsista

Oct 20, 2011 23:47

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Title: Intoxication
Author: namelessamelie
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8,200 (sorry!)
Summary: Five years later, he is brought in to steal the job she’s been working towards at ( Read more... )

!round 3 2011!, rating: pg-13

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dormiensa October 21 2011, 00:55:31 UTC
*wub* sooo glad all that UST culminated into such a satisfying ending. ;) the bit about the lust potion is brilliant! something else to add to my behind-the-scenes-of-canon folder!

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namelessamelie October 31 2011, 04:19:17 UTC
I'm honored to be a part of your behind-the-scenes-of-canon-folder! =) Glad you liked the story!

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xfsista October 21 2011, 02:15:03 UTC
Guh! This was great!

I was particularly taken with your Draco. Not only for being truly Slytherin with his manipulation, but also the way he verbally lashes out when hurt. I found that very insightful as a characteristic. Often, Draco is written as mean just for the sake of being mean. I like that you have him doing it more as a defense mechanism.

The build up of tension was wonderful. As it was getting closer to the end and Hermione was starting to come around, my heart ached as Draco started to retreat.

The use of "the potion made me do it" bookend was also something I thought was great. I love when things come full circle.

Lovely job. I enjoyed it immensely. :)

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namelessamelie October 31 2011, 04:18:35 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that you liked it, although I wish I could have written a fic especially for you (with prompts that *you* supplied!). I'm also a big fan of guarded/self-destructive!Draco, so I'm especially glad that you enjoyed that characterization. =)

By the way-- an amazing writer AND a fellow Community fan?? I think we need to be friends right away!

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xfsista November 1 2011, 17:05:37 UTC
Regardless of who supplied the prompts, it's still awesome-sauce. But I appreciate the thought. ;)

I mainlined the first two seasons of Community in the last couple weeks before season three started, so I just got into it. It speaks to my geeky little heart.

So, yes! Friends! :)

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strawberry_kait October 21 2011, 02:40:33 UTC
This was lovely, Amelie! Once again, you've swept me up in a beautiful, tension-filled love story that happens to have (an implied?) Happily Ever After. How DO you DO that?! :D

Brava!

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namelessamelie October 31 2011, 04:20:22 UTC
Thanks, love! =) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

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rzzmg October 21 2011, 06:14:02 UTC
Goodness, this was sheer brilliance! You write so lovely, as well. I adore so many passages in this story, that it's impossible to say which were my favourites. Certainly beginning the story with a potion mishap and ending it with one was wonderful circular plotting.

Simply lovely work!!! Going to my favourites as well.

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namelessamelie October 31 2011, 04:24:01 UTC
Aww, you're too kind. =) Thanks so much-- I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed it!

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margaritaabate October 21 2011, 08:41:41 UTC
Love love love

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namelessamelie October 31 2011, 04:24:59 UTC
::sends just as much love in return!::

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