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Title: Intoxication
Author:
namelessamelieRating: PG-13
Word Count: 8,200 (sorry!)
Summary: Five years later, he is brought in to steal the job she’s been working towards at
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I was particularly taken with your Draco. Not only for being truly Slytherin with his manipulation, but also the way he verbally lashes out when hurt. I found that very insightful as a characteristic. Often, Draco is written as mean just for the sake of being mean. I like that you have him doing it more as a defense mechanism.
The build up of tension was wonderful. As it was getting closer to the end and Hermione was starting to come around, my heart ached as Draco started to retreat.
The use of "the potion made me do it" bookend was also something I thought was great. I love when things come full circle.
Lovely job. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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By the way-- an amazing writer AND a fellow Community fan?? I think we need to be friends right away!
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I mainlined the first two seasons of Community in the last couple weeks before season three started, so I just got into it. It speaks to my geeky little heart.
So, yes! Friends! :)
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Brava!
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Simply lovely work!!! Going to my favourites as well.
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