Poem - My Sorry Wishes.

[draig_glas]

Hullo, just posting my poem, I'd really love some feedback! Thanks!

Title: My Sorry Wishes
Rating: PG?
Warnings: Mentions of death...?
A/N: I came up with this in my maths exam, just proves that maths is depressing...

Comments

[merlinsgeekyfan]

*sniffle* GIMME A KLEENEX DUDE! *blubbers onto your shirt*

Really sweet and emotional, and even though one or two rhymes were a bit... eh - for want of a better/real word - other ryhmes were really magnificent! ^_^

Beautiful hun, as per usual!
Georgia xx

[draig_glas]

Thanks! I know some of the rhymes are downright meh-worthy, but I don't usually do poems with rhymes...

Thanks again! Oh! *Gives tissue*

[stand_december]

wow, that's beautiful. It's very moving. Don't be nervous, it's amazing. WRITE MORE POETRY!

Captain Kirk agrees with me.

[draig_glas]

Wow! Thanks! I'll try ^__^