Legacey of Death

Apr 26, 2005 22:22

The depth of the night open to the eyes of a stranger, and a familiar face steps out of the light. A girl with cloudy grey eyes emerges, with a vengful posture she steps forward. Draining the lights of their dim power the girl is disgusted. The weakness of the world has gone to her head. Confident that only herself is pure, the world is her enemy, ( Read more... )

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draicon April 27 2005, 03:33:59 UTC
tell me if you want me to continue with the story.

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draicon_ociard May 21 2005, 20:30:27 UTC
That's very good. I like the way you use words and sentences, and the atmosphere of the text is brilliant, somewhat blue and mysterious. The story just seeps into me.

Do continue. I'd love to read the rest.

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