Give It Away, Gen fic, PG-13, 2/?

Nov 06, 2007 13:25

Title:Give It Away
Author: dragynfly_grl
Rating: PG-13
Warning:Rated for language and violence, some non-graphic sexual references in later chances, maybe. This is a work in progress, but it's all plotted.
Summary: Sam loses Dean but not in a way he's prepared to accept and struggles to pull their lives back together or face the fact that the best thing for ( Read more... )

give it away, nano

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desdomonda November 6 2007, 23:26:39 UTC
This is really cool. You had my attention right from the start. I'm really enjoying the way you're putting the words together. I've never read a necklace fic, but I'm really interested now.

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dragynfly_grl November 7 2007, 11:45:37 UTC
Ah, the necklace is my secret obssession. I'm giving it a whole backstory here. I hope I don't lose anyone I'll say up front that other than how Dean gets the necklace, I'm completely making up the rest. I don't think for a minute that it actually does what I say it does. Will hopefully make for a good story though. Thanks for reading!

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rojaji November 7 2007, 02:46:08 UTC
Fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice... Well, no one fools him twice, not anymore.

YEAH sam!

"No one screws with family,” he snaps, shoving the gun down his pant. “Bitch."

HELL YEAH sam!!!

whew, I was breathing a little hard there myself, shame on dean for scaring poor sam like that. but then hey, he was kind enough to get whumped for us, so I can't complain!

but hey, sammy getting his digs in, cool. and then dean feeling the pain, and oh, guess sam's hurt a little worse than we thought... heh... poor guy.

ooooohhh, necklace!fic!!!!!

awesome!!!

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dragynfly_grl November 7 2007, 11:47:02 UTC
Yays! So glad you liked it. Yeah, Dean's gotten them into a bit of trouble, it seems. In his defense, like I said in the first chapter, it's not really his fault. He might get a smidge OOC in the next couple chaps, but I'll fix him by the end. Thanks for reading.

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rupertgsnum1fan November 7 2007, 04:32:24 UTC
ooh! still exciting! :D

poor Dean, I would imagine he would be pretty freaking upset over losing that amulet, I mean, we saw how pissed he was in 'Skin' when the Skinwalker had his amulet

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rupertgsnum1fan November 7 2007, 04:35:29 UTC
oh, and I love this:

Fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice... Well, no one fools him twice, not anymore.

Hehe, reminds me of a quote from our oh so eloquent president:

"Fool me once, shame on - shame on you; fool me twice... look, ya fool me once I can't get fooled again."
*snort*

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dragynfly_grl November 7 2007, 11:48:58 UTC
Yes, I 'm secretly obssessed with the necklace. I have to give it a purpose. I don't think for a minute that it actually does what I'm gonna make it do, but I like the idea. Of course, where Dean got the necklace is the spoilery that I can't give away until the episode airs, but I"m gonna try to push that scene til the end. I hope I can hold it off til then. LOLZ.

And yeah, gotta lover our president. *facepalm*

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stjra November 9 2007, 12:39:41 UTC
Another excellent chapter!

I just love my Hurt!Dean, but I love Protectve!Dean too! So I'm totally hooked on this fic.

Can't wait to read more and see your take on Dean's necklace. YAY!

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dragynfly_grl November 9 2007, 13:03:11 UTC
Thank you for reading. I have the next chapter ready to post. I just have to let my inner editor out of the closet long enough to put the smackdown on it. So glad you like it. More necklace in the next chapter and more Hurt!Dean and Sick!Sam. Cuz who doesn't need more of those?

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dragynfly_grl November 12 2007, 11:14:33 UTC
Eep! Sorry 'bout the cliffies. Um, I had this story all plotted out, and I intended for the chapters to all be longish and not all end on cliffies, but my boys decided to go off script, so I don't always know what they're going to do next, lol. When something happens that sounds like a good hook to me, I quit until the next scene is ready to be written.

*smishes you so much for reading*

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