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[dragynflies]

TITLE: Breakthrough
AUTHOR: dragynflies
RATING: PG 13
DISCLAIMER: Heroes cast is not mine.
SUMMARY: Can something be only partly broken?

Part one: Of Bishops and Knights

Part two: Checkmate

Part three: Castle

And the new one…

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Comments

[catyuy]

Oh good this means he didn't kill Hiro.
I love this story and will stay near my laptop waiting for more......zzzzzzzzz (catyuy has fallen asleep)

[dragynflies]

LOL.

No, he didn't kill Hiro...but you have to admit, Sylar having Hiro's power helps work out some of the kinks in an attempt at a long distance relationship, LOL.

I'm glad you're still enjoying this!

[catyuy]

And is much better than Daphne's power.
I don't think superspeed would work well with his hair.

[or_ryn]

Your words are so poignant they just kill me.
And your characterization of little Noah is adorable. He's smart like his dad, but I can also see he's already fiercely protective of his mom. "Show me your sparkles" and "I thinked I could do that" made me want to give little Noah a huge hug. *loves him*

[dragynflies]

Aww, thank you.

Little Noah is total love, I agree. Stupid Heroes writers killed him twice. That's gotta be illegal in some states.

[mrstater]

Gah, this limbo they're in is so painful -- but of course it would have to be! I really like how you're dealing with the complexities of this relationship after 3x12, and how fiercely protective Elle is of Noah. I love how she keeps nailing Sylar with unanswerable questions, and how he doesn't try to make excuses for himself anymore. The watchmaker needs to be fixed. :(

Loved this line: “He has a father,” Elle says, like he hasn’t spoken, “and he has the right to know who you are, even if you don’t deserve to know him.”

And I love that Noah is an empath, too! Seems like something that will help break down the walls between Elle and Sylar a little more, too...

As always, looking forward to more. :)

[dragynflies]

Thank you! I of course want them back together as much as everyone but I don't think Elle is ready yet. Poor Elle.

Thanks for reading (and commenting, cause comments are love.)

[mrstater]

Wait, he's an empath? I thought he could just make the "sparkles" float, using his telekinesis.

[dragynflies]

No, you're right -- he can just manipulate Elle's electricity. I didn't plan to make him an empath.

[speccygeekgrrl]

How much do I love Noah? Answer: SO MUCH OMG ADORABLENESS.

♥ Elle's protectiveness, and her wariness, and how he's trying so hard to get back into her good graces.

Also, wonderful nod to the ~*~tingles~*~ lie detector ability xD

[eternal_moonie]

Awwww, I love it!!!