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Dec 12, 2008 14:01

TITLE: Castle
AUTHOR: dragynflies
RATING: PG 13
CHARACTERS: Elle & Noah, Sylar
DISCLAIMER: Heroes cast is not mine.
SUMMARY: She can’t reconcile the man who kissed her and held her with the man who pinned her to the beach, kissed her and then cut open her skull.

Third part of my Chess series that started all by accident.
Part one: Of Bishops and Read more... )

castle, heroes, chess, fanfic

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vanessagalore December 12 2008, 20:24:23 UTC
I really like where you're taking this. Emerging powers and family history; Elle recognizing the danger she brings to the people around her. And it's neat that you're using the inconsistency of plotting from the show as a plot point. I'm glad you're continuing this series.

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eternal_moonie December 12 2008, 20:28:48 UTC
ABSOLUTELY love it!!! I like where you're going with this.

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havemy_heart December 12 2008, 20:55:59 UTC
I'm all teary again. I'm very proud of her for doing whatever is necessary to keep Noah safe. It was a big step for her not to immediately run away when she realized June might get hurt because of her. I love that she has made this little life for herself and Noah, and has people that care about her.

I'm glad Gabriel is trying to show how much he's changed, but I'm also glad that Elle isn't automatically trusting him again. He has to prove himself.

Awesome job, yet again :)

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jncar December 12 2008, 21:08:06 UTC
I love how she's re-made herself for Noah, and how she's let June become her new family.

I really like the mystery of who Sylar's become now, and what he's been doing for the past 3 years.

It's really intriguing and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

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18october December 12 2008, 21:19:14 UTC
Awwww you gotta write more, i love this one :)

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