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[dragynflies]

TITLE: Checkmate
AUTHOR: dragynflies
RATING: PG 13
DISCLAIMER: Heroes cast is not mine.
SUMMARY: SEQUEL TO Of Bishops and Knights and it is probably necessary to read that one before this one to understand it.

Huge huge thank yous to cruiscin_lan

I know I said I wrote a one shot, but then I had to write this too.

Comments

[spooky_xphile]

Oh my god! I think I nearly cried there for some reason. Very good!

[ashesfor_trees]

Dude. You can't leave me like this!!
It was fantastic--sad, but that's why it was so fantastic.

[vanessagalore]

You fucking OWN this pairing, dude.

I hereby copyright them on your behalf.

[sorte_13]

that was amazing and sad, please may we have some more?

[liz_will_ow]

You have a good handle on these characters. The tone is even throughout the story and the characterizations are spot on. This is perfect, with the mixture of humor and cuteness coming from the Elle/Noah relationship, and the drama coming from the Sylar/Elle dynamic. Very good.

Would loooove to see more. There is just so much potential to explore the rebuilding of a relationship (if you continue, I think a slow rebuilding of that relationship would work much better--and make more sense--than a quick make-up), and the building of a relationship between Sylar and his son.

Guh, I hope you continue! Your writing never ceases to amaze!