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Dec 02, 2008 13:38

Fuck it. I was going to save this to post until after I'd written my fucking paper, but here. I'm sick of holding onto it, and I want to know if it's any good.

TITLE: Deceit 2/?
AUTHOR: dragynfliesPAIRING: Elle/Gabriel ( Read more... )

deceit, heroes, fanfic

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eternal_moonie December 2 2008, 19:44:41 UTC
AWESOME!!! Cannot wait to read how it continues!

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spooky_xphile December 2 2008, 19:50:58 UTC
*jumps up and down*

Yay! I love this fic right now. Please do continue!

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havemy_heart December 2 2008, 20:00:32 UTC
This is turning out so well! I'm loving it :)

One little thing:

Instead, he says nothing, just stares at him with those big, blue eyes.

I think you mean *she* says nothing.

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princessbella24 December 2 2008, 20:04:30 UTC
This fic makes me irrationally happy. Your writing is so good I especially like this line :"Can’t even light up his own electricity because it makes him ache inside like a damn child". Aww, he really has changed!.
Thank you for giving Mohinder something to do besides run around with pointless storylines:P
I really cant wait for the new update.

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dream_infinity0 December 2 2008, 20:28:08 UTC
great chapter

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