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Dec 01, 2008 22:42

TITLE: Deceit

AUTHOR: dragynflies

PAIRING: Elle/Gabriel

RATING: R for content

DISCLAIMER: Heroes cast is not mine.

SUMMARY: Post ep for 3x11, with potential spoilers for a picture from 3x12 but no plot spoilers from future episodes. Unless I’m psychic.

As per usual, this wouldn’t be any good without cruiscin_lan


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vanessagalore December 2 2008, 04:54:01 UTC
Hmm. I've been wondering what you would come up with after tonight's episode. It's hard to comment since I haven't been paying attention to the real show, just to your fics. But you know, perhaps you are psychic. Of course I enjoyed it as always.

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dragynflies December 2 2008, 04:56:14 UTC
I've been really into it lately (in case that wasn't obvious) but esentially, tonight's episode started with some pretty sexy pillow talk (Kbell does bedroom voice way too well) and then getting shot at, then Sylar getting his throat cut open, then Hiro blinked them to a beach, then they made out, then he cut open her head.

I'm pretty sure it's not Elle who's a sociopath, because I'm concerned the writers are on something.

And really, what I should have come up with is my 20 page lit review, but this was more fun. :) I'm glad you liked it!!

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vanessagalore December 2 2008, 05:03:28 UTC
Oh, I actually watched tonight. I just meant I don't know all the backstory for Sylar, and I think I'm actually missing some of Elle's as well, so some of your details confused me. But don't bother to explain them to me, they weren't necessary for appreciating the fic. KB would have chemistry with a lamppost, as they say. I thought the final confrontation at the Bennet house was rushed; there was a lot of info being presented and characters having realizations, but no time for reactions. And Hiro mostly annoys me, because I have to read subtitles. I don't know why that annoys me.

The real Heroes writers are definitely on crack, as far as I can tell. I'm glad you're apparently relatively sober; I can follow your storylines. Now go write your paper.

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dragynflies December 2 2008, 05:05:34 UTC
What details confused you? Just curious!!

I'm pretty sure you're right with the "Kbell can have chemistry with anything" but she gets bonus points since she's been friends with Zach Quinto for years.

I thought everything was rushed - they have too many plots, too many charactes and not enough screentime for anyone.

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ateenwriter December 2 2008, 04:59:24 UTC
*sniffle*
damn it! She had better wake up or some shit next week or so help me!

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catyuy December 2 2008, 05:12:02 UTC
I love you.

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autumn0000 December 2 2008, 05:12:14 UTC
thank you so much for writing this..ILU! lol it helped return some of my sanity

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faded_facade December 2 2008, 05:23:15 UTC
Thank you for writing this. I love you!


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dragynflies December 2 2008, 05:24:02 UTC
OMG I LOVE THIS BANNER THANK YOU SO MUCH LOL

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faded_facade December 2 2008, 05:33:38 UTC
You are so very welcome! catyuy had the idea and I decided to act on it. :D

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briarspell December 2 2008, 05:32:05 UTC
this banner is AWESOME.
:D!

(great fic, btw!!!! THANK YOU!)

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