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[dragynflies]

TITLE: Crowds

AUTHOR: dragynflies

PAIRING: Elle/Sylar

RATING: PG 13

DISCLAIMER: Heroes cast is not mine.

SUMMARY: For mrstater in response to the prompt “crowded.” A little look inside Elle’s head through seasons 2 and 3.

Comments

[mrstater]

Ooh, this is fantastic! I haven't read that much Elle-POV fic, so this summary of her thoughts since we've met her is a real treat; I feel like I know her a lot better after reading this! I especially like how you've neatly laid out the ways they've both saved each other, and their daddy issues, and how Gabriel's building Elle's confidence in all those ways Bob never did -- particularly nice detail here: And he lets her drive. She's in the front seat for once, rather than just sitting off to the side, looking pretty, like in Company meetings.

Thank you very much! :D

[faded_facade]

I really enjoyed this! I like how it's told from Elle's side from her earlier days at the Company to how she feels now about everything.

And I just loved the "she knows he likes her best" because it's so true!

[midasu]

Great job, Elle is a hard character to do, mostly because of her huge mood swings and crazy behavior but you made her make sense.

[di_elle]

you really understand Elle... beautiful done! :)

[stromatowerry]

ah! so beautiful! I love this, I love to understand Elle, and this one story really represents her thoughts, it's just so... Elle!

love it!