Wow! That was a powerful story. I love the way you write Oz. You get his voice better than anyone else I've read.
I do have to admit that I almost didn't read it because of the rating. I've read too many NC-17 fics that have let me down recently. But this was great. You kept the emotion going all through the naughty bits. Other fics I've read become so mechanical when it gets to the sex.
Thank you for a wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much.
No wonder you thought this would be a good gift to reward myself with after finishing my paper :)
This is incredibly, incredibly hot!
And the way you write Oz is just so spot on. You've really got his voice down. I can picture Seth Green saying all these things and it being perfect.
"Yes! Wait. What?" Willow's face comically went from excited to confused. "Me seduce Giles? Um, boyfriend! Hello!"
Oz couldn't help smiling at her. "I am well aware that you have a boyfriend. And he's pretty glad you remembered about him too, considering how long you've had a crush on Giles."
This was one of my favorite parts :) I love how clueless Willow is to Oz's intentions. It's adorable
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I do have to admit that I almost didn't read it because of the rating. I've read too many NC-17 fics that have let me down recently. But this was great. You kept the emotion going all through the naughty bits. Other fics I've read become so mechanical when it gets to the sex.
Thank you for a wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much.
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Oz has really been speaking to me lately. He was always one of my favorite characters. I'm already working on another story with him and Giles.
Thanks for taking a chance on the story, despite the rating. It's been a long time since I've written smut, so I'm glad it worked for you.
*hugs*
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That was amazing! totally loved it! (Even if I knew I shouldn't have read it at work! *VBG*)
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Did you like the little changes I made?
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No wonder you thought this would be a good gift to reward myself with after finishing my paper :)
This is incredibly, incredibly hot!
And the way you write Oz is just so spot on. You've really got his voice down. I can picture Seth Green saying all these things and it being perfect.
"Yes! Wait. What?" Willow's face comically went from excited to confused. "Me seduce Giles? Um, boyfriend! Hello!"
Oz couldn't help smiling at her. "I am well aware that you have a boyfriend. And he's pretty glad you remembered about him too, considering how long you've had a crush on Giles."
This was one of my favorite parts :) I love how clueless Willow is to Oz's intentions. It's adorable
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Oz has really been speaking to me lately, and I've been having a blast writing him. I'm already working on another Oz story.
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