I've been looking for an update for a while now - thank you!
I am slightly confused by the interlude - in the last interlude, Martin was packing a box - in this one, he remembers that he just left while Shaun was in class. Did he send his stuff home and then leave while Shaun wasn't there, so that neither Shaun nor his parents would know where he'd gone?
I loved all three parts - Shaun at least, is getting closer to finding some answers, and hopefully Zach!
Ooh, sorry about the confusion...I was trying to imply he left home a few weeks after the Shaun came home and found him packing. Guess it didn't come across quite like I planned. But yes, you have it right, he tried to hang in there but couldn't do it and ended up just leaving one day while Shaun was out :(
I'm glad you're still liking the story, hopefully it'll all make sense soon!
I'm so glad to see the story continue! Shaun snapping at the grocery store manager was my favorite. Your description of Ellen seems so in keeping with the little bit of her character we got in the movie. Well done! I look forward to more!
I have been neglected this LJ for quite some time now. As I go through my friends page today, though, I realize that you are one of the LJ friends I miss the most. My knitting/crafting LJ is knittergoddss and my writing one is 2010poetic if you want to add either of those as friends. I read both regularly, and check my friends pages on there often as well (although not so much my crafting friends page).
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I am slightly confused by the interlude - in the last interlude, Martin was packing a box - in this one, he remembers that he just left while Shaun was in class. Did he send his stuff home and then leave while Shaun wasn't there, so that neither Shaun nor his parents would know where he'd gone?
I loved all three parts - Shaun at least, is getting closer to finding some answers, and hopefully Zach!
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I'm glad you're still liking the story, hopefully it'll all make sense soon!
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I'm working on more this very second, hopefully it'll be up before too long.
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