The Master and Mrs. Pond Part 2

[dragonofmemory]

The Master and Mrs. Pond
By: Memory Dragon
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who, nor do I make any claim to.
Characters:  Delgado Master, Amy Pond, Third Doctor, Brigadier, Sergeant Benton.  A small bit of implied Doctor/Master.
Warnings: There is a lot of sheer and utter crack in this.  Also, some angst.  And some Master torture by the monster of the

Comments

[dragonofmemory]

Don't worry. You aren't the only one who is having this sort of problem with Capslock abuse. Nar did the same, and based off Cy's response to the last one (and her many WRITE MOARs since I wrote the first one), I have the feeling she will be much the same tomorrow when she wakes up and finds it. XD

It's my theory that the Brigadier put a stop to any such betting in UNIT, because UNIT soldiers obviously have better things to do than to conjecture on the private life of the chief scientific adviser. But Jo is a special case and can really wheedle her way into anything.

And really, the Brigadier has been around more than enough soldiers to know who is getting laid regularly and who is pining. You can't hide things from the Brig. XD

As to him making it better, the Brigadier always makes things better. He's just that awesome. Not that I'm biased or anything

[narwhale_callin]

She was the one who requested and whined for me to write the fic about it.

Hey hey hey, I do not whine. I forcefully suggest and encourage. Big difference.

And why am I not excused from the O-E, O-H, FPPE?

(P.S. Haven't had a chance to read over final version yet, will do so at later point in time.)

[unknown20troper]

Yes, yes, Amy knows that they are/were/will be an item! :D And she fantasied about their sex life! OMG, that's awesome!

And there's angst! Parallels (the Master, Amy and the Purple People Eater; the Doctor, Amy and the Space Whale)! And MELS! OMG, I love how she was mentioned! 'Cause yeah, we know what she turns out to be...

[dragonofmemory]

Amy is lacking Rory for two months by this point. Fantasizing is all she's got at the moment, so she's going to make it good.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the comments!

[unknown20troper]

Yep, yep, that's for sure. :D XD

You're welcome!

[narwhale_callin]

Have I mentioned how much I still love this? WHAT? I HAVEN'T? How frightfully negligent of me! I must correct this grevious oversight!

I STILL LOVE THIS LIKE SO MUCH. SO MUCH LOVE.

I NEVER WANT AMY-VERSE TO EEEEEENNNNNDDDDDD.

AND I WANT MORE TEDDY AND AMY ADVENTURES. MOAR. MOOOOAARRR

I also like the new things! ^^

[dragonofmemory]

Hm, more caps lock. XD Still, I'm always grateful for your comments. <3

I don't remember quite what was new, to be honest, but I'm glad it worked for you. We'll see about more. I've still got this Lizzie thing, after all. And then maybe something non-sequel-ish, because I apparently can't write a sequel without making things longer than the original fic. -_-;;;

[calapine]

DUUUUDE. SO MUCH LOVE FOR SO MANY THINGS: the way you shift the tone from the awesome lols of Amy commenting on the Doctor and Master's relationship to her sense of betrayal and the uncertainty of what was the right thing to do; the bit about Mels, paralleling her with the Master; the quiet, reflective coda, which feels so very Three-ish, and then finishing with AWESOME GLEE at the chocolate and she SLAPS THE DOCTOR HAND FOR TRYING TO NICK MORE. A gloriously spot-on bit of characterisation.

And much as I love Doctor/Master, this story's just made me desperate for more Master and Amy. I love the relationship you developed between then two of them. It's one I can believe in, and that you manage to make fun, touching and not entirely safe.

The Brigadier raised the other eyebrow, managing to silence both protesting Time Lords with some super power that Amy was jealous of.

This line makes me incredibly happy.

[dragonofmemory]

*blushes* Many thanks.

My beta reader is convinced that the Master and Amy have a epic affair across time and space. Not like, sex affair, but cuddling and the occasional snog. I did really enjoy her relationship with the Master though. You don't see him interacting with too many other people besides the Doctor, and it was kind of nice toying with the idea that a companion can actually like him and come to see why the Doctor still values the Master's friendship.

The Brigadier really is just that awesome. XD

Thanks for the comments!

[elisi]

Don't have the time to give this the feedback it deserves, so I just want to say that it was utterly delightful, I shall always be thinking of Delgado!Master as 'Sexy Teddybear' from now on, Amy (and her spot-on realisation re. Doctor/Master) was *brilliant*, and the way you made the Master sympathetic, but also kept him deeply disturbing and quiet nasty, was just wonderful. Oh and Three was pure love. <3

[dragonofmemory]

He is a sexy teddy bear. You just want to cuddle that hotness.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic! Thanks for the comments!