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dragonchiclet

Second World - Chapter 2 "Faith Switch Issues"

Sep 08, 2013 22:02

Warnings: angst (Fei/Yoh), smex (Aki/Fei)
Disclaimers: all Viewfinder characters belong to Yamane Ayano
Rating: R

( Faith Switch Issues )

Comments 6

anonymous November 11 2013, 20:23:19 UTC

Hi, Daphne here!

Feilong and Akihito - they sure have a chemistry ^__^

And why not! I read your disclaimer, on the cover page, that Feilong is OOC here because he never harmed Akihito. In the manga I feel he didn't want to either, that he never saw Akihito as a person. Ok, that's terrible, too.

Anyway Akihito here: so not a person always to be stepped upon!

And Yoh: I absolutely get off on this Yoh :P

What a juicy chapter!!! :P

anonymous November 11 2013, 20:26:02 UTC

Just read your profile: "Winnetou"?

Sprichst Du Deutsch?

dragonchiclet November 13 2013, 09:10:05 UTC

Da ich den überwiegenden Teil meines Lebens in Deutschland verbracht habe, sollte ich Deutsch sprechen können ;-)

All the same, when having posted in English I prefer discussing in English - I myself adore reading other peoples' discussions and am very frustrated when those are, for instance, in French ;-)

No account yet? I think I can't pm you then - try again.

Posting on ffnet: I simply have no time right now. I want to give the text a quick once over (for instance had too much "rumours" in ch 1) before I do. Maybe.

daphne007 November 23 2013, 22:50:46 UTC

And weeks later I finally do manage to create an account! Hi! ^^

daphne007 December 11 2013, 12:29:10 UTC

Now after all this pm'ing I want to saysomething here too!

What I like best is this take on Akihito and Fei Long's relationship. You said someone called them "friends with an interest". That's just it! I would love more Akihito/Fei Long, perhaps describing them during some mission, like that freighter plane action. There you could even bring a light version of Akihto kidnapped to Hong Kong? I know, you said Fe never harmed Akihito here. I'm sure you could think of a way^^

The night after the operation is touching. Could it be you had in mind the way Asami should have acted?

dragonchiclet December 14 2013, 03:43:02 UTC

Thank you - but please don't tempt me!!! The Antonov episode is what I'd LOVE to flesh out. Don't know why I find those giant planes so sexy - and the idea of those two VF cuties in the "cockpit" *g* so hot *sweat ( ... )